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Review Detail of Ernestly in Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

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Ernestly
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While it has all the things needed to be a five out of five, it's too fast paced. There is no flow from chapter to chapter. It's like the writing is hitting a bullet list. This happens and because that happened now this is happening, now this other thing is happening and we constantly move forward. It's like a guy richie film without all the visials or soundtrack so a post-it note of a story. Which is a shame due to all the ingredients of a solid and potentially amazing novel there.

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Definitely not fast paced.