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Everything about this novel oozes perfection. And the best thing is I'm not even trying to oversell it. Think thisd be my second review here. Since author wants a follow-up review now that it is closer to reaching the milestone of 100 chapters, I thought I should oblige and support him from my end. writing quality is simple and neat. Readability is smooth and there are almost no jargons you'd have to use Google for. I'm not sure how else to describe this section so I'll just say that it is as good as a native English writer's standards if not more. story dev and world background take the path less trodden, since the novel has mixed rpg type with cultivation. so far it has worked in it's favour. author has put a cultivation chart (?, don't know what else to call it) in the second auxillary chap. I think that would give most of readers like me a fair idea about the world background. only drawback I'd have to mention about the story dev would be mc hasn't progressed much in his rank. i understand author doesn't want to give the Eren handicap of being a MC, but we would like him to move ahead now. Schems and planning are good. But supernatural power in supernatural world are equally necessary. Character design is where this story shines the brightest. every character feels like it is as real as a fantasy setting allows it to be. the author had promised a troupe busting novel and till now he has delivered on it. there are no young masters or enemy after enemy coz mc looked at them funny. I'm only deducting a star from updating stability coz author has dropped the release rate from 14/ week to 12/ week. Hope we get to enjoy at least 18/ week release rate. Good luck author, and please don't drop this masterpiece!
Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
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This was an in depth and detailed analysis. Couldn't ask for a better follow-up review. Thanks for listening to my rants in author's note and acting on it. all those notes were worth it. About Eren still being at the starting line of his ranking journey, in a way u r right. But the things you get after putting hard work feel rewarding. Having an extra cheat takes that away from you. That's because they come to you after you invest time and efforts in them. I think you'd appreciate chapter 86 and 87 when you see the fruits of your patience! ;) I can only say that the release rate was adjusted to have less plotholes in the storyline. It was also turned down a notch so that I could stay productive outside this platform. I don't have any intention to drop the novel as of yet. Unless something extreme happens, all my works and I are here for a long haul. The release rate may drop or increase in the near future depending upon the responses my works receive on WN, but it won't be halted completely. So rest assured! I might pause this novel for a few days and continue on my ither works. Let's see if and when my work goes pro. If that happens, it give me the stability I need to write my heart out. Lastly, thank you for your words appreciations. They truly mean a lot, especially when I don't earn anything off the book as of now. And stay tuned! ;)