Review Detail of Waakaranai in Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
Review detail
I always give detailed reviews. But for this novel, I wanted to make an exception. It is that good, and has a huge potential. Now, I'll talk about it one pointer at a time. nothing to complain when it comes to writing quality. i know that grammatical errors and glaring typos can affect a reader's experience. this didn't happen with me for this novel. story development is solid and firm. but it hasn't progressed much. as I'm writing this review, the novel is 40 chapters deep. the mmc still hasn't left what we call the newbie zone. I see that the writer is talking about starting a new arc. hope that changes this thing. we want the mc to explore the world some more. the character design is just like story dev. it is nuanced and in depth. and so far, every character has been given a particular shade. but since mc hasn't left the beginners area, there aren't many characters to talk about. till now I can only remember the names of Eren, Nina, Dom, and Lin. it's not a bad thing per se. but we already know so much about these characters now. it's about time the story introduces some more chars. updating so far has been stellar. i see the release rate of 23 chapters/week as I'm writing the novel. world background is intriguing. i like that the author has kept things straightforward. we still don't know the exact power structure as of now. but i for one am not in a hurry. wishing the author all the best and may this review help you and your novel grow further [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
Grayback
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Thank you for giving a constructive review. yes, things will change after the new arc starts. i didn't want the readers overwhelmed with many characters and places so I focused on building the recurrent characters' background and storyline. The second arc will see the mc leaving the "newbie zone". and readers will get to know about the power structure and world background in the academy when mc enters it. so stay tuned!
You just weren't looking. There are a lot of fairly minor grammatical errors: Missing words, rogue plurals, fragmented sentences, some awkwardly worded sentences, wrong word usage, etc. A little editing would go a long way. Now they aren't bad enough to cloud the meaning of the story like some novels I've seen, but they are by no means nonexistent.
you might b right. but i meant the kind of errors this novel has didn't become a roadblock for me to consume the story. don't like to point out the grammatical errors if the write-up is above certain standard. have enjoyed this novel as a whole for about 100 chapters. I don't know if the quality drops drastically after those chapters and u r talking about those errors.
Davevan:You just weren't looking. There are a lot of fairly minor grammatical errors: Missing words, rogue plurals, fragmented sentences, some awkwardly worded sentences, wrong word usage, etc. A little editing would go a long way. Now they aren't bad enough to cloud the meaning of the story like some novels I've seen, but they are by no means nonexistent.
Grayback:Thank you for giving a constructive review. yes, things will change after the new arc starts. i didn't want the readers overwhelmed with many characters and places so I focused on building the recurrent characters' background and storyline. The second arc will see the mc leaving the "newbie zone". and readers will get to know about the power structure and world background in the academy when mc enters it. so stay tuned!image
you should read author review and extended author review in the auxiliary chapters. it has been explained in a very detailed manner there
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