This is an antihero novel. so future readers need to take that into consideration before judging the MC's actions in this novel. what i liked: every action mc takes has a valid reason behind it. the actions might be cruel, heartless, and deceptive in nature. but they always have their reasons. and those reasons too are based on sound logic and information available for the mc at the time. what can be improved: the background story sometimes feels like it is getting stretched. we don't need reasons all the time. sometimes they can be just assumed by the readers. that's it. this novel has become my new fev after Dual Cultivation for 'culture' story with plot [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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LIKEThanks for the input. Mentioning a few things at lengths in the pilot arc are necessary to make readers familiarise themselves with the MC's thought process and the novel's world background. It has also been done to have minimal plot holes in current as well as future storyline. There will not always be explanations behind every action of MCs when the second arc of the novel starts. By then, the way the mc thinks and the way of the world around him would be well established. Stay tune for that ;)