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GojoVir
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2021-10-04 21:13

This is an antihero novel. so future readers need to take that into consideration before judging the MC's actions in this novel. what i liked: every action mc takes has a valid reason behind it. the actions might be cruel, heartless, and deceptive in nature. but they always have their reasons. and those reasons too are based on sound logic and information available for the mc at the time. what can be improved: the background story sometimes feels like it is getting stretched. we don't need reasons all the time. sometimes they can be just assumed by the readers. that's it. this novel has become my new fev after Dual Cultivation for 'culture' story with plot [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Grayback
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Thanks for the input. Mentioning a few things at lengths in the pilot arc are necessary to make readers familiarise themselves with the MC's thought process and the novel's world background. It has also been done to have minimal plot holes in current as well as future storyline. There will not always be explanations behind every action of MCs when the second arc of the novel starts. By then, the way the mc thinks and the way of the world around him would be well established. Stay tune for that ;)

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Grayback
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Hi, readers. Thank you for reading or at least checking out Vile Evil Hides Under Veil. It's about the main lead who died with a lot of regrets and decides not to have them when he is given a second chance. It's a typical fantasy work with a typical fantasy setting but with an atypical level of world details usually not found in other novels. Although there will be a larger plot at play in the background, it will be filled with fun moments. It'll be a pun-riddled, fun-filled, troupe-busting, and fantasy-fulfilling ride meant for mature audiences. A few FAQs: 1) System? No 2) Relation to Anime Eren? Almost none. 3) Relations with Female Leads? Intimate with multiple women without marrying them. 4) OP MC? No 5) Edgelord MC? No 6) Evil MC? Duh! 7) Cliched time travel theme? Yes 8) Cliched plot? No 9) Young Master Troupes? Almost none 10) Weak to strong progression? Yes 11) $mut novel? Not really. Sparsely included as a way to highlight Eren’s journey on the path of seven sins. 12) Info-dumps? Optimally placed and Incorporated into chars' dialogues at the start and mostly as a third person POV later on. Dialogues become more concise after chapter 125. 13) Slow burn? Kinda yeah. But not really if you like the storyline to make sense with in-depth details. 14) Daily schedule? 2 chapters/day + Bonus release 15) Is this novel worth reading? Yes 16) Replies in memes? Memes are justice! You can open up the novel’s auxiliary volume and read the Author's Review for more in-depth details. It is recommended that you do that. But can be skipped if you have your queries answered in the FAQs above. Read the FAQs and author review in the auxiliary volume before raising a query That's it. Happy reading! ;)

Waakaranai
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I always give detailed reviews. But for this novel, I wanted to make an exception. It is that good, and has a huge potential. Now, I'll talk about it one pointer at a time. nothing to complain when it comes to writing quality. i know that grammatical errors and glaring typos can affect a reader's experience. this didn't happen with me for this novel. story development is solid and firm. but it hasn't progressed much. as I'm writing this review, the novel is 40 chapters deep. the mmc still hasn't left what we call the newbie zone. I see that the writer is talking about starting a new arc. hope that changes this thing. we want the mc to explore the world some more. the character design is just like story dev. it is nuanced and in depth. and so far, every character has been given a particular shade. but since mc hasn't left the beginners area, there aren't many characters to talk about. till now I can only remember the names of Eren, Nina, Dom, and Lin. it's not a bad thing per se. but we already know so much about these characters now. it's about time the story introduces some more chars. updating so far has been stellar. i see the release rate of 23 chapters/week as I'm writing the novel. world background is intriguing. i like that the author has kept things straightforward. we still don't know the exact power structure as of now. but i for one am not in a hurry. wishing the author all the best and may this review help you and your novel grow further [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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