Review Detail of HolyJuan in I Was Contracted By The Empress As An S Rank Familiar

Alright so the biggest issue I had with the novel is simply how the MC keeps telaporting all over the place lol. Let me explain by giving you an example from the fifth chapter. This scene starts with the MC hiding in a tree. It’s stated later that he is looking ‘down’ at a group of werewolves who are eating something and there is a girl (not the one he’s contracted with) tied to a tree ‘beside them’. The next action the MC does is ‘turn’ his head to look at the girl ‘beside him’. At first I thought that maybe his contractor had snuck up beside him but I was wrong. The girl ‘beside him’ is the exact same girl that was tied to a tree beside the werewolves. I used this example because its simply the latest one I read. Throughout the entire story, I couldn’t picture how the scenes were playing out most of the time. I don’t have much experience in reading tml translated novels but those that I have read never gave me this issue. I could be wrong, if tml translated novels have these ‘character teleporting’ issues, I’d like to know so I can avoid them.