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HolyJuan4mthReplied to RaiseHavocIn all honesty I feel like Darkwood isn’t that bad or I’m just happy with anything besides Bunnies🤷♂️🤣
But destiny, it seemed, had other plans. Shortly after ascending to the throne, the original Ethan fell ill, succumbing to a mysterious ailment that claimed his life. And in the wake of his passing, Ethan Bunnies had taken his place as the new Ethan Darkwood, the ruler of the Kingdom of Verdant Vale.- HolyJuan6mthReplied to AddPlusCh 17 14) 1 Year later. Kim?
- HolyJuan9mthCommentedThen, Hiruzen quickly hid it and pretended nothing had happened. "How many times do I have to tell you? How many times? Knock before entering! I'm studying right now! You've seriously disturbed the quality of my learning!"
- HolyJuan9mthCommented"To hell with Konoha! We have betrayed them before, and we can do it again. This time, let's turn to Iwagakure!" added another, sharing the same sentiment.
- HolyJuan9mthCommentedBowing slightly, Kana said, "How about I help you feel more energized?"
- HolyJuan9mthCommented
Every slight touch from now on 😂
Yet, any sense of victory was swiftly crushed as she felt the gentle tap of his finger against her waist. It was a deceptively light touch, but its effect was devastating. Ais was sent hurtling through the air, her body propelled several meters away with frightening speed. - HolyJuan9mthReplied to HolyJuan
It’s what I thought of his daughter saying lol
It was at that pivotal moment of despair, a beacon of light amidst the darkness made everything else worthless. Her radiant golden hair, flowing like strands of spun sunlight, cascaded down her slender frame with enchanting grace. Each strand seemed to possess a life of its own, shimmering with an otherworldly glow. - HolyJuan9mthCommented
Dad feed me
It was at that pivotal moment of despair, a beacon of light amidst the darkness made everything else worthless. Her radiant golden hair, flowing like strands of spun sunlight, cascaded down her slender frame with enchanting grace. Each strand seemed to possess a life of its own, shimmering with an otherworldly glow. - HolyJuan10mthCommentedThe manga was set in a Victorian era world and it showed the story of Eran Joseph who joins a secret society called 'Black Crown' after his brother, a freedom fighter, gets killed in front of him.
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- HolyJuan2yrPosted
Alright so the biggest issue I had with the novel is simply how the MC keeps telaporting all over the place lol. Let me explain by giving you an example from the fifth chapter. This scene starts with the MC hiding in a tree. It’s stated later that he is looking ‘down’ at a group of werewolves who are eating something and there is a girl (not the one he’s contracted with) tied to a tree ‘beside them’. The next action the MC does is ‘turn’ his head to look at the girl ‘beside him’. At first I thought that maybe his contractor had snuck up beside him but I was wrong. The girl ‘beside him’ is the exact same girl that was tied to a tree beside the werewolves. I used this example because its simply the latest one I read. Throughout the entire story, I couldn’t picture how the scenes were playing out most of the time. I don’t have much experience in reading tml translated novels but those that I have read never gave me this issue. I could be wrong, if tml translated novels have these ‘character teleporting’ issues, I’d like to know so I can avoid them.
- HolyJuan2yrReplied to Eris86
Down boy
"Is this a person with SSS-rank talent? She's really pretty even though she is a little witch." - HolyJuan3yrReplied to HolyJuan
Unless the elf can shapeshift into an animal?
His shadow were all General grade but they didn't gain the ability to speak, instead they went to looking like normal animals again. Though anyone would could feel Aura's would know that these things were deadly enough to take a nuke by themselves. - HolyJuan3yrCommented
I think my image of an elf is different than the authors? To me an elf would look more human than some animal?😂
His shadow were all General grade but they didn't gain the ability to speak, instead they went to looking like normal animals again. Though anyone would could feel Aura's would know that these things were deadly enough to take a nuke by themselves. - HolyJuan3yrCommented
A dire wolf and panther as pets is understandable to some degree however, an elf is questionable? Unless this wood elf is female and he’s keeping her as a ‘unique’ type of pet😏
Though he could hold Ten shadows he stopped on those he wasn't going to get more until he made it further to the highest ranked monsters. He would have gotten rid of the ones he had but over the time they grew on him so he kept them now they were like pets. - HolyJuan3yrReplied to The_GrindelwaldAfter that he went back three times a week for the past twelve years, he was now able to kill A Rank Monsters. He also had three shadows only thinking they were good enough for him to fight with they were; a giant A Class Dire Wolf, A Class Wood Elf, and a S Class Magic Panther.
- HolyJuan3yrPosted
I know this review might come off as bashing so I apologize in advance if it does so. I also want to mention that this review was written after I read up to chapter 27 so there is still a chance the story improves in later chapters. -First I’m gonna explain things I didn’t enjoy and then I’ll explain why you might want to still read it. 1) The writing is Pretty bad, I would give it a 2/5. You can still read the story but don’t expect to be immersed, because you will have to correct a lot of errors as you read. 2) The characters don’t feel like themselves at all. They seem to be there in name and appearance only, while their personalities went out the window. 3) The flow of the story just feels forced and akward to me. There are many moments that scream ‘cringe’ and the writing itself also adds fuel to the fire. -Now for why you might want to still read it. 1) Djinn! If you are a fan of ‘magi’ then you might want to give it a read. 2) If all you care about is a harem then why not give this a shot. Be warned however that there weren’t any ‘R-18’ moments from the chapters I read. If thats what your looking for. 3) The MC is OP and tends to solve all scenarios rather quickly. In fact, the MC never used his full prowess from the chapters I read. Perhaps author was doing this to get to the big moments in ‘fairy tale’ or to just finish the story quickly, I might never know.