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Write_D_Words
Write_D_WordsLv113yr
2021-10-23 21:42

Writing Quality and Stability: You can still improve more as you write the story, also the update is daily. Story and Character, World: Over all , it blended well. Not much details but it is understandable! Keep updating and keep writing! Congratulations on your second book <3[img=recommend]

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Thank you for the feedback!~

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Lunatic_ali
Lunatic_aliLv1

**SPOILEDS ALERT*** Intro: Okay so this book is the perfect example of underrated but yet so good. The way you've merged the different genres and somehow still managed to write this is amazing. The contrast between them is beautiful and it's amazing over all. Characters hehe: The characters are all unique with different personalities that we all can relate to. I haven't seen much character development yet but we're getting there and the every character somewhat feels important even though they don't get that much screentime because they all play a part in the story. I love how you implemented each character with unique character traits instead of just making them bland side characters like other novels do ( no disrespect lol ) and hertwig is STILL my favorite character so plz bring him back lol ≧﹏≦ Story: The story has alot of suspense and every cliffhanger leaves me wanting more and I'm just waiting for more chapters so I can just binge read em ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ This story has alot of emotions plus it has that slice of life comedy feeling while also being so dark. Some scenes did feel like they were missing something but majority of them were written so good and proceeds so smoothly with the story. (ʘᴗʘ✿) There's not alot of things that I disliked or didn't enjoy but I would love if you showed more of the side characters stories as well cuz rn it's just Sam and nancy lol. 😂 Conclusion: so yeah great book blah blah blah ( jk ) Can't wait for new chapters to see how the story proceeds and I'd recommend this book if you want something a little different from your typical cultivation overpowered MC novels. If you're looking for something dark but want that slice of life feel as well than this is the perfect novel ヾ(^-^)ノ

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