Review Detail of DymenS in Ecto-Yaksh

First of all, the story development is good. Personally, I'm not a fan of slow paced novels but yours is quite fast. The characters are most interesting and I love how you synopsis clearly tells what the story entails. There errors are a few (not that many) and I also love the setting. However, not to rush but the novel could do with more chapters. I like it, keep updating!