I like writing and making up stories.
Thank you a lot. Sometimes it's hard to update daily, I can't even update for a week or more because of school. But I do plan to start updating at least once every two days! Again thank you for your review!
The writing quality is amazing, I liked the characters, world background wasn't the strongest point, but nothing to worry about. Keep up the good work author!
I love the way you portray his emotions/actions and thoughts. 😄
The pronunciation is on the harder side. I wanted to make it so that you can hear the hard ''R''. Well, it's best to read it out loud and make it sound the way that's more fitting for you. And thank you for your comment!
As of right now, I'm trying to fix the first few chapters to make them not so confusing. Thank you for the review!
The plot is interesting. The writing quality is good, but still needs some work. Story develops nicely so I had no problems with that. I would like to see how Shade's character goes on in the story(the way he thinks etc.) Over all good work author!
The start is nicely written, it explain the feelings really beautifully. The novel it self is written really good. The world background is good. I had a fun time reading this. When I read this I feel like reading something that will blow up in the future! Nice work author!
Starting it! I will write a review when I finish all 6 chapter.😄
What's related to it? I'm curious😅
The novel is great. I had a bit of a hard time reading at the start the writing was confusing at first but it changed over time to a better and more polished one. World building is good I had no problems with it. I'm interested with the plot and story! I would like to see where this novel is headed. In the end, good job author! The relationships between the characters are interesting! I also had no problem with character design.