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I like writing and making up stories.

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to Dymens

    Thank you a lot. Sometimes it's hard to update daily, I can't even update for a week or more because of school. But I do plan to start updating at least once every two days! Again thank you for your review!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
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    The writing quality is amazing, I liked the characters, world background wasn't the strongest point, but nothing to worry about. Keep up the good work author!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
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    It's a really good first chapter. I had fun reading it! Bayu is interesting, and I wonder who is that woman, and what's the deal with this library.馃憤

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
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    I love the way you portray his emotions/actions and thoughts. 馃槃

    The woman slowly descended the stairs with a smile on her face. She was wearing a dark blue blouse with a long tight skirt, the sound of the high heels that she wore was getting closer and closer to the man who was standing silently in front of the librarian's desk. Despite the man seeing a beautiful woman in front of him, there was no sign of surprise or astonishment, the man's face still flat like it had lost its muscles.
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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Commented

    Interesting!

    The man looked up, looking for the ceiling of the building that was increasingly unseeable as far as his eyes could see. The man thought that now he was in a tower, from where he stood, he could see other bookshelves on the upper floors. The more he looked up, the more amazed he felt.
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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to hatentea

    The pronunciation is on the harder side. I wanted to make it so that you can hear the hard ''R''. Well, it's best to read it out loud and make it sound the way that's more fitting for you. And thank you for your comment!

    ''Sho or wae deno ate er o meral rasa. Or es utacu ina uts herid ot ercas iowo oe kile te urcreta tah es jin te eshu, tate uai oro pri tosh es o fake osa if ere es o meral rasa insa it wou te hut (Listen I didn't know you were a mortal race. I was cautious and just tried to scare away or kill the creature that was in the bushes, that's why my first shot was a fake so if there was a mortal race inside it wouldn't get hit.)''
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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to hatentea

    As of right now, I'm trying to fix the first few chapters to make them not so confusing. Thank you for the review!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to AkuaSenpai

    Thank you!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to Prince_nonchalant

    Thank you! I will fix the issues you mentioned!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Posted

    The plot is interesting. The writing quality is good, but still needs some work. Story develops nicely so I had no problems with that. I would like to see how Shade's character goes on in the story(the way he thinks etc.) Over all good work author!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to Darkshade33

    Thank you!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Posted

    The start is nicely written, it explain the feelings really beautifully. The novel it self is written really good. The world background is good. I had a fun time reading this. When I read this I feel like reading something that will blow up in the future! Nice work author!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to CREATIVE_SPACE

    thank you glad you liked it!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Commented

    Starting it! I will write a review when I finish all 6 chapter.馃槃

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to Arc_Valkyria

    I'm glad to hear that you like it!

    Ch 2 The Green Haired Girl
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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to CREATIVE_SPACE

    Thank you!

    Ch 1 The blessing of Makore family
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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to Arc_Valkyria

    Thank you a lot!

    Ch 1 The blessing of Makore family
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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to Arc_Valkyria

    What's related to it? I'm curious馃槄

    ''Aalish!''
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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Replied to Arc_Valkyria

    Thank you for your review! I hope the story interests you as you go on!

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  • Reo_
    Reo_8mth
    Posted

    The novel is great. I had a bit of a hard time reading at the start the writing was confusing at first but it changed over time to a better and more polished one. World building is good I had no problems with it. I'm interested with the plot and story! I would like to see where this novel is headed. In the end, good job author! The relationships between the characters are interesting! I also had no problem with character design.

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