Jesus man! r u some lowely expert. reading from your mother's basement in a legend of Zelda Tshirt . sucking on your thumb . playing with your butt . we didn't need all of that from you! you gonna scare off the author! some of us dig this book! take a look . alot of us love,like this book. yah dushebag . grow up . constructive criticism is one thing . what you did was hateful and childish . don't bother replying to my post . anything after this point will just be fun for me . I promise you .

I'll reply for him. Jesus man, are you incapable of typing a single grammatically correct sentence?

that's funny you think what you wrote matters to me. I needed a laugh

Also arent u doing the same thing as him right now, also if anyone sounds like they are living in their mothers basement, it is you. The dudes giving his opinion, it might be harsh but if the author cant handle harsh criticism, he shouldnt be writing, because hes gonna get it eventually.

Ahem. How is this a rip off? Please explain. I would like to know why you call it that before I say something rude and stupid. Until then, I will simply disagree with you. Also, how many chapters of this did you read? I hope it's not a repeat of "can't read past chapter three", because novels often start off bad and get better later. In fact, based on the time skip they had at the end of chapter 39, the novel will probably get significantly more interesting when more chapters are released. I really do suggest you read more before calling a book "trash" or "dumpster fire".

It matters enough for you to remember to respond. Checkmate.

2 shae . one point for you! should I send it to your safe space?

Just going to say this right now, this person left an honest review, and I feel like that is all that matters, not whether or not it was positive or not, sure 99% of the other people who posted reviews loved the story but there is still that 1% who just don't. If you are going to insult someone for being downright honest then you have gone too far. I haven't read the story yet so I am saying this with no bias on whether or not the story is good or not, but what really makes me mad is not when someone insults mine or someone else's work, but when someone gets insulted for being honest. I am positive I will get hate from this comment but I am just being honest and trying to stand up for someone who was being honest.

checkmate .gmab .

tf is happening here

"I hope that you'll have read all of this; otherwise your opinion is dumb and doesn't count also I'm basing my response on the idea that chapters I haven't read are going to be better than the ones I've already read."  Like bro, please tell me this is ironic.

dude, can you at least mention what exactly is bad in the writing instead of throwing claims left and right?

Actually, it's more of "stop saying dumb and stupid things, also I've checked and you say dumb and stupid things a lot, you should probably read more before leaving a review. Also, things usually get more interesting after time skips."

Actually, it's more of what I've already said. Things don't usually show any increase in enjoyment after a time skip, I've never heard anyone say that things get better after a time skip until right just now, that encompasses not just this account but the multiple accounts that I used to use to farm fast passes which encompasses quite a bit of reading time and yet during all that I've never heard someone say this once.

I like you man thank you for saying that cuz he ticked me off!

But anyway, I don't think I'll agree with you on what you've said, so I'll just agree to disagree.