Review Detail of OldBone in Castle Guard's Retirement Plan

I am sorry for shamelessly rating my novel 5.0. Hi, I am OldBones a newbie author. I am quite the gramps and just started my journey as a writer. I enjoyed my time reading novels. In the retirement homes, there is nothing fun to do with my fellow PTSD friends. So, I read novels from time to time. Now I am trying to write.