Review Detail of LordFish in The daily life of Origin Being
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Author tries to include everything but those random additions of other things in a world are not something I prefer. Even though I'm not religious, this novel basically blatantly attacks a few, I personally am not a fan of stuff like this. The reason for this is that nowadays every chinese novel I read does blatantly humiliate other religions and culture and I am sick and tired of this. I couldn't continue to read more and basically stopped at the Dxd arc itself. The author may also not have background in English, so you'll be finding errors here and there and a lot of repetition too.
The daily life of Origin Being
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As you could see other than the vocabulary and grammar. Most things are just my personal dislikes, basically a rant that can be ignored. Rewriting would improve the language aspect but my personal dislikes would still be in the way here. Anyways hats of to you for actually listening to me ranting and keep on working on your project. Though I would suggest creating imaginary gods and such rather than directly naming them from different religions. Even though it's just a fiction but there are still people who would take these personally.
RapidOoze:I am rewriting this novel, so you could try again, the rest is upto you..
