Review Detail of Haru_Toujo in The daily life of Origin Being

tbh with you, after reading the first few pages this story has to offer... it's not good, the word 'after' is being used over and over again like there's no tomorrow, the next second I noticed that, I immediately dropped this. by just seeing that the word ''after" is being overly used, it tells me that the author's vocabulary isn't that large. well, that's all, I do respect you for still updating, compared to me that drops whatever I'm writing when I get bored, so yeah, this is my review.