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Bloom759Lv142yr
2022-01-10 00:27

When you said you were lacking in your grammar or expression on form of the POV, I was quite intrigued by the prologue. It's almost like being hit by a rush of adrenaline, there were some parts which had me confused, but I'm sure it would be addressed in the later chapters. The tragic love story between the ML and FL at the onset makes me wish they do not experience it when she transmigrates. I love your descriptive abilities. Even though there might be a little error due to POV change and context, it's still readable and I'm sure you'd improve greatly

Princess of the Silver Ocean

Ice_Princesss
4.8
108 Chs

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Ice_PrincesssAuthor

Thank you so much!

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Ice_Princesss
Ice_PrincesssAuthor

HI READERS, I'D APPRECIATE IF Y'ALL READ THIS REVIEW AS I JUST WANT TO CLARIFY A FEW THINGS: ~Initially, I was planning on writing the story from Astoria's POV, but after a few chapters I decided to change it to third person because I was finding it a little difficult to continue. Thus, you may come across pronouns like 'my' and 'I'. I tried to correct those so if you find them in the story, do comment it so I can correct them . ~You may also find spelling/grammatical errors when you read, I'm multilingual so sometimes my English gets a bit mixed up so if you do find errors, let me know. ~ Although this is a fantasy romance, the romance aspect comes later on in the story. Also, the romance is not over the top. I plan to create a sweet + beautiful romance. ~My story is slow paced for a reason. I want to create a transmigration story that is a little different from others in which I don't jump into action after like 2-3 chapters so please note that. ~Fear not tho! There will be action in the coming chapters and a lot of plot twists so do stay tuned . ~Finally, thank you for all the reviews and comments, they really encourage me to continue the story. ~Please continue supporting me and recommend my story to others❣️

3yr

AutumnsCicada
AutumnsCicadaLv11

Honestly, I have no complaints for this book. It has a captivating cover, intriguing synopsis, and a writing style that flows so naturally that I have a great time reading the book. The Author is really good with her words. She describes things well, not much but not too little, just enough for the readers to have a picture the situation the main character's in. Yes, there's some errors in the writing but it's quite subtle as I read through the chapters so fast :) Can't help it as your words flow so well that I don't have to stop and reread each sentences just to grasp its meaning, lol. So far, good job Author! Overall, it's quite a good read. The transmigration started a bit late but it's fine for me. The pacing is nice, a fast one but didn't seem rushed.

3yr
Scarlet5ky
Scarlet5kyLv6

Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now!

3yr
Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv11

Everything in this book was well written , from the synopsis, the updating stability everything is incredible this is a book anyone wouldn't want to miss this is tremendous, Keep going can't wait to read your other upcoming books .♥♥♥

3yr
Young_Master_Jay
Young_Master_JayLv10

For the fantasy readers, I recommend this book to you. The only problem with this book is the updating stability. But on the other hand, it's worth the wait. The story of thw book was immersive.

3yr
DelzGB
DelzGBLv14

First of all, I love the names in this story! c: The beginning doesn't waste time to quickly throw you into a an engaging scene, one that leaves you continuing to read so that you can get to the bottom of what's happening. Also, this is definitely one of the most unique transmigration stories I've read. I usually don't see these types of concepts explored at all, and it differenciates itself from the standard formula. So, if you like transmigration and, like me, have felt it's become stale and oversatured lately, I'd reccomend giving this story a shot. c:

2yr
Haru_Catty
Haru_CattyLv3

Never read a transmigration novel so detailed. From the synopsis to each chapter, everything has got me hooked. I absolutely loved the transmigration part and the introduction before that. It was perfectly paced and detailed. Astoria's personality is greatly written. Her emotions were explained beautiful. Also the cover is so dreamy!! Definitely going to my library! Happy writing and good luck to you, Author! Keep up the hard work!

3yr
Shico_rai
Shico_raiLv1

Character design has its beauty and the world background is described well. Astoria, the female lead is very mysterious. Overall the story is excellent. The writing quality is superb. I've to add it to my library. Keep up the good work.

3yr
King_Starr
King_StarrLv4

I love the Astoria and the fact that I can relate to this character speaks volumes about the author's ability to touch emotions. I love this book and keep it coming. And author make sure Astoria get her happily ever after. I will be waiting! 🥰🥰🥰

2yr
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