Review Detail of comedyisland in A bored Gamer and his budding harem~! (Dropped)

good writing quality with utterly terrible decisions that break immersion. mc blabbers on about how if he wields this particular item he will be mathematically invincible- gives it away to his vulnerable sister to make her stronger, which will inevitably put a huge target on her back. tells everyone he knows about the system which completely breaks immersion, this is the thing about reincarnation novels and system novels, once anyone mentions the enxistence of the system or their reincarnation it immediatly breaks immersion. its cause everyone knows these novels arent truly stories but simple fanfictions, once immersion is broken you realise there was nothing to be immersed in anyway. overall i enjoyed the first 7 or so chaptera, physically couldnt read the rest. i think the author has good writinf skills but constantly writes himself into a corner.