Review Detail of Tomorrowceases in Sign-In On My Raft

Pretty good so far, the writing quality is good. The fast-pace doesn't feel rushed, rather it's effective. It's a little bit rough, but like author said, he just upload it and plans on editing it afterward. The only thing that'd bug me so far would be the world background, but I guess since it's only the beginning, all of that will be further developed in the future. The story's quite intriguing, too. The story has potential--I mean, i'm no expert, that's for sure, but from what I see, it has potential to grow well if author keeps it up. Good job.