Review Detail of ArtoriaPendragon_ in Issei The Perfect Being (Remastered)

World backround is just DxD with some genderbent characters, as well as new characters. Character design is utter garbage, the mc doesn’t have anything special about him and is just kinda there, he is an overpowered mc who Makes girls fall in love with him by smiling. Story development like character design is terrible, it’s incredibly rushed and way to fast. Updating stability is good Writing Quality is readable but not perfect, there are many grammar and spelling mistakes. My recommendation is to rewrite the fanfic and give the mc more personality, make the story slower, get rid of a lot of his power, make it harder for him to make girls fall in love, make the whole abandonment By his parents more realisitic. Overall just make him more unique and not the cliche mc who makes girls fall in love by smiling. (This is all written on my phone, Sorry about spelling mistakes)