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Kelator
KelatorLv13yr
2021-12-18 20:50

I was hoping for something a bit more mature but this is like a Disney's little mermaid version of a evolution with a system novel. I mean your grammar is great, the story had potential, but it's not something made for adults. I was so into it until the turtle showed up and then it just went downhill for me personally. The teenage part which you know what I mean did it for me.

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Master_Of_gu
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Thank you, I have provided my time, I hate this kind of childish stories of adolescence It is sheer stupidity, but the picture and the address shown as a monster, a mere fairy cartoon for children Funniest

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Yumbrella
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A good novel. I enjoyed reading it a lot. It really contains a huge amount of genres such that if I were to point out each one by one, I would probably write an essay. Surprisingly it feels really comfy without making me feel confused or bored. The grammar and other English stuff are almost perfect or maybe I was a bit too immersed in the novel quite enough to ignore it. The writing style tends to be more similar to Chinese? The humor of the author seems to have a 50-50 chance to be a hit or a miss. Probably you will cringe and laugh every single chapter. Also, there is a sense of fluidity between chapter and environment change, it doesn't feel too "rigid". The story isn't an exact replica of a cliche reincarnation, but it does indeed have some cliche stuff that probably wouldn't bother anyone much. I love how amazingly the genres mixed up with themselves. There is qi, magic, and other stuff but believe me when I say that both cultivation novel fans and the magic reincarnation fans will probably enjoy it a lot. There is an extreme lack of side character plot tho. I really would like to see side stories and more chapters based on characters other than MC, I feel that the author isn't taking proper advantage of the 3rd person's view to give little more insight on others except for the MC. The story is also similar to a XuanHuan novel, MC is indeed getting strong beyond a limit(i bet 300 chapters more and MC will be tearing dimensions and space) and excitingly it does the power increase in a very steady and "non-cringing" way. Till the point where I have read (chap 396), there isn't any romance(except {spoiler}) but please don't think that I feel disappointed about it tho, it would make me feel really weird if a shark has romances with human (even weirder if the human reciprocates). Interestingly coming to recent chapters, I could see something interesting happening between seb and ******, and I say I approve with all my heart! To those who are curious and haven't started reading, I'm not spoiling! read yourselves HeHe. Alright now coming to character development, it's pretty average, to be honest, and actually could ultimately be called the weak point of this novel. None of the characters except MC was given enough spotlight or chapter appearance to create a lasting impression for me. Even the character's personalities are a mystery since there's too little information about them. I hope the Author could do something about this because then it would easily be 5 stars or 4.5+ stars novel for sure. The world background is solidly built as of 390 chapters. The world might be confusing at first but later it became really good. for the information new readers, the world is properly explained in later chapters. so just like the system would say: "You aren't high level enough to access world information, newbie reader!" Okay, that's it! thanks for spending time reading this lengthy review and good job author-san for making an awesome novel!

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