Logan179

Great story, I loved the idea and how it's being executed. The only bad thing is the slow pace of the chapters. .......z.z.xmxmxmxmdmmdmdmdmdcmdm

Finally, a new chapter.

this story is one of my favorite stories i hope it keeps being updated as the story of is very good and i love the idea of ​​the story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I think the story is good but the only thing that bothers me is the MC I think he is very bad playing basketball honestly I don't feel like reading this story

I think the story more or less I don't think it's bad but I don't think it's good either😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

The original story already had a bad protagonist but this story manages to make it worse by making [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

So far the story is very good and very well written not to mention that it is the first good eleceed fanfiction that I see I hope the story continues to be updated

finally an eleceed fanfiction waited for you to keep updating the story so far the story is good

thanks for the chapter

the story started out good but there are many things that I didn't like as an MC to be able to fight the Phoenix being it was already showing that even with his power the MC still has a limit since he lost for x-23 not to mention that he loses an arm and totally unnecessary and meaningless besides that the whole fight with the X-Men had no reason the MC just needed to leave but even with all that I still I decided to give the story a chance but seeing the last chapters I have but no interest in reading this story and a pity as I thought the story idea was very good