Item: My Medical System
Rating: 1.4
Author: Ganoush

GanoushLv132yr

2022-08-13 16:15

I literally cant read the story and follow whats happening, in the first chapter alone he gets a call then gets into his car and then it jumps to he is in a car with someone and they dead leg each other? then he gets a call about a medical transport and told that it isn't a rally, then it cuts to him writing down some race cars racing results. Worse than MTL and that's really telling.

My Medical System

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