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Ben_Blakley
Ben_BlakleyLv157mth
2024-09-30 00:40

Short to the point story. Not bad at all G3.

Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)

Guiltythree
4.9
62 Chs

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Guiltythree
GuiltythreeAuthor

Thank you! :]

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Guiltythree
GuiltythreeAuthor

Shameless author here, writing a review for their own book. Please indulge me a little ;) I will leave this review here in case any of the readers have questions they want to ask me. If you do, leave them in the comments: I will be sure to answer them to the best of my ability. Just don't ask me when was the last time I've slept or what on Earth compelled me to become a writer, because honestly... I hardly remember! :) As to how I would rate this book - without a doubt, this is the best book I've ever written. ... Largely because it is the only book I've written! I truly hope you'll like it. Please enjoy Free Fall :)

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timmyboy
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The author has a big heart. Most books have great world building, great story, great writing. However most books still fail. The reason, they fail is in the character department. The characters are none existent, they are robots, psychopaths. This book does it differently, the characters feel human. It sounds like such a small thing. However it what differentiates an ordinary novel to a great book. So if you are an aspiring author, this book is a great study on how improve your character design.

3yr
sebseb
sebsebLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Divine_Peasant
Divine_PeasantLv14

I can’t even explain how great this novel is. The author spent his time deeply thinking about some of the more harrowing implications that “powers” can have on a person and society. I'd definitely recommend this if you want a superpowered novel with a more in-depth story.

3yr
Defying
DefyingLv11

The author has a way with the words. I came here after reading my daily chapter of shadow slave and what do i find?? Another master piece!! Bro... the main characters have personallity especially Cleire(i love her), and even if the novel has just 62 chapters i enjoyed every one of then (i even teared up some times). GREAT NOVEL. I had a test tomorrow(still have actually) and end up using a great chunk of my time today reading this, im screwed. Keep going Guiltythree your novels are awesome dude.

2yr
Draco_Lucifer69
Draco_Lucifer69Lv4

Umm... author? What happened to the story? Can you continue pls!? Pick this gem and continue................................................

3yr
Iggy_8317
Iggy_8317Lv10

Great story! hoped that it would have been longer however. One of the best webnovel writing I've read to date. Sad that it didn't get the attention it deserved to go on

1yr
Daoistc2UMR4
Daoistc2UMR4Lv10

Came to read this because the shadow slave chapters aren't coming fast enough :) The story is fantastic, captivating since the very beginning. guiltythree is an incredibly talented writer and I'm looking forward to much more in the future!

1yr
Darine_ALRAMMAH
Darine_ALRAMMAHLv1

After reaching the final chapter, I just can't wait to get more!. I am in love with the plot twists and the tension you create in the reader's mind. I love the way you slip emotions through your writing. Added to library and I highly recommend!

3yr
Irina_Gurdzibeeva
Irina_GurdzibeevaLv1

Just finished three chapters of the novel and can’t wait to read it all! So interesting and live narration, bright characters. Don’t believe it’s the first work of the author. If so, wishing a success to this one and many more in the future!

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