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Guiltythree
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2021-09-16 21:20

Shameless author here, writing a review for their own book. Please indulge me a little ;) I will leave this review here in case any of the readers have questions they want to ask me. If you do, leave them in the comments: I will be sure to answer them to the best of my ability. Just don't ask me when was the last time I've slept or what on Earth compelled me to become a writer, because honestly... I hardly remember! :) As to how I would rate this book - without a doubt, this is the best book I've ever written. ... Largely because it is the only book I've written! I truly hope you'll like it. Please enjoy Free Fall :)

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Petru_3777
Petru_3777Lv14

Why so short? I'm thinking about reading it but the length seems like an issue

Guiltythree
GuiltythreeAuthor

It is the length of a traditional novel. The story came to its conclusion, and I decided to not continue it due to the lack of interest from WN audience. Sadly :]

Petru_3777:Why so short? I'm thinking about reading it but the length seems like an issue
Hey_its_Bex
Hey_its_BexLv14

Also what's your deal with bad coffee? It's in both of your novels on here.

Guiltythree
GuiltythreeAuthor

Ha, I didn't even notice it myself :] Great observation.

Hey_its_Bex:Also what's your deal with bad coffee? It's in both of your novels on here.
Martin_Merlo
Martin_MerloLv11

Guilty, I'm your biggest fan... I have read tens of novels but your work Is the best. Right now I'm completely hook up with Shadow Slave. Please continue your great work!

Amal_Tassimov
Amal_TassimovLv2

The author definitely has coffee issues :)

Hey_its_Bex:Also what's your deal with bad coffee? It's in both of your novels on here.
xx_cc
xx_ccLv10

Great story and a fitting end. I would have loved to experience more about Matt's descent into madness. Some part of me hopes for a happier ending for the wraiths, and to read about the aftershock of Zero's actions. A short story but very well developed, and beautifully written. Im glad to have been a part of this journey, thank you for this.

Guiltythree
GuiltythreeAuthor

Thank you! :]

xx_cc:Great story and a fitting end. I would have loved to experience more about Matt's descent into madness. Some part of me hopes for a happier ending for the wraiths, and to read about the aftershock of Zero's actions. A short story but very well developed, and beautifully written. Im glad to have been a part of this journey, thank you for this.
DaoistemjESx
DaoistemjESxLv1

Hello , I enoying this novel it ’s great and Shadow slave also great . Can ask someth ing regarding to the novel kinda gullible did Sam and Claire had a deep relation like in physical or they were in initial stages norm ally seeing each others ? Anyway I’m kinda too emerging in the novel when reading so that’s why anyway great novel.

BLANK_Z
BLANK_ZLv13

you're the one who worked shadow slave ?? now I have to try it

Guiltythree
GuiltythreeAuthor

Hey :] It was physical.

DaoistemjESx:Hello , I enoying this novel it ’s great and Shadow slave also great . Can ask someth ing regarding to the novel kinda gullible did Sam and Claire had a deep relation like in physical or they were in initial stages norm ally seeing each others ? Anyway I’m kinda too emerging in the novel when reading so that’s why anyway great novel.
Gugu_Ndlela
Gugu_NdlelaLv3

shadow slave has me line,hook and sinker and since l'm waiting for another chapter l'll just get hooked on this one,to the realms with math

wxiwh
wxiwhLv1

Thank you for amazing 6 hrs :]

AliceKatsuki
AliceKatsukiLv11

I have a question about the relationship between ability and descent into madness for wraiths - does it depend from person to person on how many aspects can they hold before their mind breaks and they become insane? also, connected to that, could Matt have lived a very long time if he didn't try to counter Zero`s ability given that he was naturally predispositioned to handle a lot of aspects (it would take him a long time to reach the limit if he just lived a normal life, I assume)

Guiltythree
GuiltythreeAuthor

There is a correlation between the number of aspects one can hold in their mind and the onset of the disease, but there are many other factors involved. As for whether or not Matt would have ended up in the same state if he did not fought Zero, sorry, but that is left ambiguous on purpose :] One might argue that he has been experiencing symptoms from the very first chapter of the novel, or that he does not have the disease at all. It is up to your interpretation.

AliceKatsuki:I have a question about the relationship between ability and descent into madness for wraiths - does it depend from person to person on how many aspects can they hold before their mind breaks and they become insane? also, connected to that, could Matt have lived a very long time if he didn't try to counter Zero`s ability given that he was naturally predispositioned to handle a lot of aspects (it would take him a long time to reach the limit if he just lived a normal life, I assume)
Daoist676621
Daoist676621Lv15

one of my favorites even with how short it is I only checked it out because I'm waiting on shadow slave but I was blown away (: can you write another novel based on this world either the after affects of this rebellion or going back to the days of when the wraith had their own city?

Rakahie_4958
Rakahie_4958Lv2

Free Fall was one of the most impactful webnovels I've ever read. Even with the unclear ending it just flowed so well and made so much sense.I didn't think it was possible to shatter that 'perfect image' in my mind so thoroughly with 3 words.Anyway, since the message I made in the discord server got deleted instantly I have a question: does the pyramid have to do with pyramid mentioned recently in SS? Even solely through symbolism? They have some overlapping elements: searching for relief, mindbreak

Guiltythree:Hey :] It was physical.
Derrick_Banks
Derrick_BanksLv2

G3 is so awesome to write ss . I really love that book

ISiTbElOw
ISiTbElOwLv2

I'm on your channel but no one has said a thing don't even know what's happening but I'm there just because of Nephis she held me spellbound author I have questions no for the novel myself ....did you mean it that you really learnt English from... k dramas

Guiltythree
GuiltythreeAuthor

Well that was half a joke :] I had a bit of English at school, but mostly I learned it from playing video games, reading books, and watching both TV shows and Kdramas

ISiTbElOw:I'm on your channel but no one has said a thing don't even know what's happening but I'm there just because of Nephis she held me spellbound author I have questions no for the novel myself ....did you mean it that you really learnt English from... k dramas
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