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2021-11-18 01:55

man!! this is the fist time I'm excited for the future chapters. and it's a fanfic one at that! and I'm quite shock how this fanfic seemed to have yet been popular. cuz of lack of review from the readers. author you can.. you know encourage them? and the voting of PS(Power Stones) so it'll be on the lead boards. this is AMAZING! LIZ APPROVED

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God_Child
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Glad u liked it UMU!! so I need to ask for reviews and PS?? Well, maybe I should since I have quite a bundle of chapters now. Thanks!!

MEA_24_
MEA_24_Lv13

although your fanfic may defer to others. but I like your writing style. and although this have many changes. it all felt too natural. that I can't seem to see it as fanfiction but a cannon! please continue ur story it's really amazing how u point their differences between them and also there personality. please author-san continue writing this with passion of YOUTH! 🤩 AND YES YOU CAN ASK FOR REVIEW FROM THE US. AS A COMPENSATION FOR READING IT! GIVE IT A REASON LIKE 'WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THE STORY?' ('ETC.....) AND ALSO FOR POWER STONE. THATS ALL THE READERS CAN GIVE TO YOU AS WERE NOT PAYING YOU. SO IN RETURN YOU GET MORE READERS. NOT A BAD CHOICE NO?

God_Child:Glad u liked it UMU!! so I need to ask for reviews and PS?? Well, maybe I should since I have quite a bundle of chapters now. Thanks!!
MEA_24_
MEA_24_Lv13

or ALSO ADVERTISE THIS BOOK FROM YOUR OTHER BOOKS. SO MAYBE IF THEY ALREADY CATCH UP TO YOUR RECENTLY UPDATE NOVEL THEY'LL JUMP RIGHT IT IN IF THEIR INTERESTED. NOT A BAD IDEA!?

MEA_24_:although your fanfic may defer to others. but I like your writing style. and although this have many changes. it all felt too natural. that I can't seem to see it as fanfiction but a cannon! please continue ur story it's really amazing how u point their differences between them and also there personality. please author-san continue writing this with passion of YOUTH! 🤩 AND YES YOU CAN ASK FOR REVIEW FROM THE US. AS A COMPENSATION FOR READING IT! GIVE IT A REASON LIKE 'WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THE STORY?' ('ETC.....) AND ALSO FOR POWER STONE. THATS ALL THE READERS CAN GIVE TO YOU AS WERE NOT PAYING YOU. SO IN RETURN YOU GET MORE READERS. NOT A BAD CHOICE NO?
God_Child
God_ChildAuthor

Oh, that's a nice option. Okay, then, I will try to do as you say. Thanks UmU!!

MEA_24_:although your fanfic may defer to others. but I like your writing style. and although this have many changes. it all felt too natural. that I can't seem to see it as fanfiction but a cannon! please continue ur story it's really amazing how u point their differences between them and also there personality. please author-san continue writing this with passion of YOUTH! 🤩 AND YES YOU CAN ASK FOR REVIEW FROM THE US. AS A COMPENSATION FOR READING IT! GIVE IT A REASON LIKE 'WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THE STORY?' ('ETC.....) AND ALSO FOR POWER STONE. THATS ALL THE READERS CAN GIVE TO YOU AS WERE NOT PAYING YOU. SO IN RETURN YOU GET MORE READERS. NOT A BAD CHOICE NO?
VermillionAce
VermillionAceLv4

Exactly, it's kinda weird that this fanfic is not on the leaderboards. It's the best Naruto fanfic as of now... Not like others who made their MC OP and then have a Harem...

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VermillionAce
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First and foremost, I would like to remind you all that this is my first time writing a review in any novel I read so I may have some things that I got. Also, I am writing this review at the end of Chapter 34 so many things may have changed when you read this. Now that's out of the way, let's start. Writing Quality- I find this fanfic easy to read and the grammar is easily out of the best out there. The author's writing style is also easy to understand and he uses simple terms. There are some misspelled words along the way but it doesn't really affect the grammar in any way. Stability of Updates- What I like in this fanfic I can expect at least two chapters a day. I don't know if that will change in the future so far, the updates are consistent. And also, the length of each chapters are pretty long so that's a plus for me. Story Development- For me, this Naruto fanfic's plot is new and I have never seen anything like it. Well, there is some similarities to some fanfics I've read but what I like in this one is that the Haku, Naruto, and Gaara is not OP and is pretty normal so far while I am writing this review. Also, I like how the romance is changed, well, I suppose it did by how the story is going so far. You will know what I mean when you read it yourself. Character Design- So far, the characters are similar to their canon counter parts except one. Well, I suppose his personality is similar to that of Shippuden but this time, he is still a twelve year old. Again, you'll know what I mean when you read it. World Background- Seriously, I don't know what this means but if what I am thinking is right, it is in the Naruto world so what else can I say? Now that's finished, I highly recommend this fanfic to all of you and give it a try. Take care and stay healthy everyone.

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