VermillionAceLv43yr

2021-09-18 20:37

First and foremost, I would like to remind you all that this is my first time writing a review in any novel I read so I may have some things that I got. Also, I am writing this review at the end of Chapter 34 so many things may have changed when you read this. Now that's out of the way, let's start. Writing Quality- I find this fanfic easy to read and the grammar is easily out of the best out there. The author's writing style is also easy to understand and he uses simple terms. There are some misspelled words along the way but it doesn't really affect the grammar in any way. Stability of Updates- What I like in this fanfic I can expect at least two chapters a day. I don't know if that will change in the future so far, the updates are consistent. And also, the length of each chapters are pretty long so that's a plus for me. Story Development- For me, this Naruto fanfic's plot is new and I have never seen anything like it. Well, there is some similarities to some fanfics I've read but what I like in this one is that the Haku, Naruto, and Gaara is not OP and is pretty normal so far while I am writing this review. Also, I like how the romance is changed, well, I suppose it did by how the story is going so far. You will know what I mean when you read it yourself. Character Design- So far, the characters are similar to their canon counter parts except one. Well, I suppose his personality is similar to that of Shippuden but this time, he is still a twelve year old. Again, you'll know what I mean when you read it. World Background- Seriously, I don't know what this means but if what I am thinking is right, it is in the Naruto world so what else can I say? Now that's finished, I highly recommend this fanfic to all of you and give it a try. Take care and stay healthy everyone.

Harbinger of Destruction

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