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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv12yr
2022-01-26 13:43

it's a really interesting plot but very poorly applied in the initial question, even if it's better than 80% of this site it's still very DRAMATIC and when I say a lot I mean it's boring to read... full of drama and mystery initially where the story should being introduced first makes everything boring and confusing, especially where you say in the tags that it's about romance, action and comedy

The Mech Lord

ReincarnatedSaint
4.5
148 Chs

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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

I stopped... dramatic and mysterious with a stressful and bland comedy that only served to wipe the smile off my face over a message I had just received

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Kasaber
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Thia Webnovel had a very intresting storyline that I’ve yet to see, there are unique names that are easy to remember one thing I find important if your like me, and read many different books at the same time. After reading 60 chapters there is a nice amount of character building but if your looking for a very creative and thought out realistic world this story has it.

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Asfyr
AsfyrLv14

I read this not expecting anything due to the cover, but wow. I'm surprised by the writing quality of this. Definitely recommended, the characters are interesting and not flat, world background is fleshed out and well thought of. This is one of the hidden gems in this platform

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I_am_fucked
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I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works

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ReincarnatedSaint
ReincarnatedSaintAuthor

Time for a new adventure and it's start with shamelessness or you could say confidence in yourself!! I will do my best!! Support me through your feedback through comment and reviews and stone me to death if you like it...

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Grayback
GraybackLv14

Congrats for winning silver prize in WPC 211- 212. Hope to see more chapters in the future, getting served like hot cross buns fresh out of the oven! ;)

3yr
ZinonWonder
ZinonWonderLv13

Just two chapters in and I could already relate to this story. It's been so long since I got stranded on this planet, and now I have another book that's worth every second of reading. The characters acted normal. The cliffhangers were good. The scenes were gripping. The dialogues were not awkward or cringy. Added to this library, gonna read it daily till the author drops it or finishes it.

3yr
weweeep
weweeepLv4

A lot of typos and grammar mistakes but if you can gloss over them and work with the author's mistakes, this has the potential to become a great story

3yr
Spirit_Wolf1
Spirit_Wolf1Lv15

Better than average. Good story line. The world and system setup are good to. love the charecter personality. The MC is far from over powered, which is a good thing.

3yr
L0N3_W47K3R
L0N3_W47K3RLv12

Its not a traditional system type novel. where everything can received instant, and omnipotent system. But in this novel, it's about a biochip included AI with scanning, virtual design, information transmission etc, it's very scientific from stand point. Not much of complete world building but its reveling from chapter to chapter and with continuous character and power development of MC. Good Si-Fi novel with unique energy cultivation and space wars with mechas. Overall very good novel, I have read in this year. And includes pets also[img=update][img=update][img=update]. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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