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the story is good it's just too much drama and annoying side characters like her mother and kimi reading it is annoying... Tch [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Reading this up to the point I have, I am ready to give my full review on this novel. for starters, let's start with the overall writing quality and development of the story. What is fascinating about this book is that no matter how brilliant the MC is, his plans are always tested. The more he tries to walk between villain and good, the more violently he will be torn to one side or another. Neutral grounds are hard to follow because in the world of MHA it is a division between what is considered Good and what is Evil, the thoughts of taking the ability of both All Might could be considered evil but just the same as taking All for One's. There is a defined pacing of action behind each thought, and the looming threat that beckons beyond the world that he prepares for along the way is a most interesting way to twist the world as it is. As for character designs. It is hard to really rate this with what little characters are original and what are not, the design of what there already is however is enough. The conversations between Neji and the other women and characters in here is very well-written, elicted strong, and have very human emotions. The cast has very well-made characterization as well for pre-existing characters which all bend towards the will of the world that the writer bounded together in one perfect package. The updates are pretty frequent as well considering how well the chapters are put together. The only flaws really is that it depends on the preferences of the reader if they enjoy the story or simultaneously enjoy both character and story. Can't critique one or the other. Always as a whole. But I look forward to the day the Author makes a full-fledged book of original design. Grand Work.

All in all it's a pretty good story. Main issues i have with the story is the character design and the feel of the story, i don't know if the author wanted to create a story with an underdog feeling but the plot gives itself to this trope, the problem. is that the MC is a bit to unlikeable for that to really work as of right now. The MC is still in the development phase but some action and reactions kinda make me hope that the Gods come fast and kill him. Maybe it was my mood as i read the story but I kinda got a depressiv vibe from the story, when I hoped for something at least a bit more training and action heavy. All in all the story is fine and still developing but the MC Character just doesn't do it for me.

it's a 5 star, but it doesn't matter to me, if you nerf me it's a 2 star romance, I'll give it 3 because it's very good it's a 5 star, but it doesn't matter to me, if you nerf me it's a 2 star romance, I'll give it 3 because it's very good

It's a good fanfic, but it's not really multiverse, since so far the MC is in the first world. Something very annoying is the plot armor of the villains being absurd and the heroes nerfed. Stain, who has no super strength or stamina, was hit by a lethal laser and was only injured, was hit even more in a direct attack to the soul and is only injured, ja Mirko who has super strength and can fight the strongest Nomus almost died for some blades, this is ridiculous.

The story went from good to bad after the mha arc after he started chasing every girl he met in naruto world all the girls will leave their crushes for him or something will happen to the person they are in a relationship seems like the author is getting fed up with this story for me

tired... it's boring, the mc is obviously strong but still suffers against some enemies that shouldn't even offer a threat, it seems that the author didn't measure how the skills would work, causing the MC to get out alive by 1 thread of some situations (large plot armor). And stop trying to add grace to some scenes to make them "better", it may be the author's inexperience but it irritates (there are still funny parts, but the realistic/dark theme of the story basically distorts this)

As the Proofreader-In-Chief, this is a really good novel that I recommend. Has good grammar and plot that can inspire a newbie to start writing. Without me, 4th would have been lost. I helped steer him in the right way.