What do you think I can do to make it more appealing?

Looking at the characters sheet I saw that you gave the MC a human form. Why? Theres no point in making the MC a non-human only to give him a human form. It defeats the purpose of it. I've read many monster MC stories and the ones that stayed true to the premise are better than the ones who stray from that path.

I'll think about it but I feel all divine beings should have a human form. plus the Female lead is a titan... Also check out the previous chapter updates tell me if you like them.

Theres nothing divine about humans so why should divinity limit themselves to such forms? Especially if they weren't human to begin with. There are 3 things that make humans different from other animals and they can all be regated in a world with magic. Intelligence: depends on the author but often creatures then to get smarter as they gain power. Hands: Telekinesis magic is completely superior to hands. Stamina: Stamina grows as the beasts become more powerful. So honestly humans aren't that special in such a setting and it baffles me why your putting humanity on a pedestal by giving non-humans a human form as if they're superior.

You win my friend, no human form. Then I should get to removing the romance tags.