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Review Detail of TriadBrew in Martial Spirit Cultivation

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The book has a good framing for the era and the storyline is well thought out. However a lot of it is just brain dumped directly on you in the very beginning rather how it is in real life, a more natural progression like peeling back the layers of an onion. The characters that get introduced do seem to have their own personality but they feel a bit stiff in nature especially around descriptions and conversations which are have common fillers or are very "go here, take this, do that"-esque. Some tend to be somewhat unnatural for the settings where talking about other characters in relation to the MC. Overall, I have enjoyed the story so far and look forward to seeing what gets written next!

Martial Spirit Cultivation

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