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2021-10-09 09:31

I arrived looking for something “nice enough” for me to spend my day entertained… something to read while eating my lunch, turns out I found a gem that gripped my heart from the very beginning and hasn’t let go since then, having me binge the whole story in one sitting from lunch time until now that I’m writing this after having dinner. The world surrounding the main characters is a bit different from the usual Isekai, one that is in my opinion a lot more realistic and “true” than most of the others out there. The characters themselves are another of the reasons I find myself unable to stop reading, thanks to their individual develpments as well as personalities…. I won’t go into details as I’m afraid I won’t be able to stop and end up spoiling something, however. The pacing of the story itself is quick enough for it to make you feel that things are indeed happening, but don’t really come off as rushed in my opinion, which is impressive as balancing the pacing of the story usually turns out to be one of the most difficult things to do as a writer (take it from someone who failed at his dream of becoming one!) The only other thing I can say to the others who might be considering this story is that I highly suggest you pick it up and fall in love with it together with the rest of us!

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LuciferSama
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Thank you, sincerely thank you. I say it every time (I don't care) but it's for reviews like yours that I write every day. I'm extremely touched and a stupid smile is on my face since haha~. Let me advise you to join the discord for more immersion in the story. That said, it's only an option I'm not forcing anyone :D Anyway, thanks again, I'll keep writing so you can all grow up with Freya and the other characters in my story. On behalf of all, thank you ! Author-san Lucifer (A fulfilled author) P.S : When I'm in trouble to write I'll read these words again and I'm sure they'll give me the courage I need ! :3

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Hello there, yes you there, Do you like: - Reincarnation, - A bit OP but well written protagonist, - Ruthless to enemies and caring to family and allies type of character, - Kingdom building, and wars, - Well developed characters, each with their own personality and story, - A romantic relationship/s development, - Depictions of gore and torture ? If you have answered yes to any of the above then it is probably a book for you, though it is not for the faint of heart, be it because of all the bloodshed or cuteness overload. The story is overall well paced, and presents you with an already well fleshed out world and a cast of characters each with their own story, interests and goals, aspirations and personality. Not all of them are as fleshed out as others but that's most likely only because the story is only beginning now. The writing quality is very good, the story is easy to follow and well written, the only part I could find fault with if I really tried is Sara's Pov chapter as it may be a bit hard to follow and illogical but that's probably because she has gone insane by that point. Updates are frequent and stable. And the story has a lot of potential in it that I can't wait to read on, to see where it will lead our protagonist and her family as well as her kingdom. Overall I'd recommend this book to any and all seeking to read a good book, see the World and it's characters develop.Or for those that wish to see the mysteries behind the real purpose of the mission bestowed upon the female protagonists unwind before your eyes in all their glory. I wish you all the best in your writing and eagerly awaiting for more~

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