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outofspiritstones
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bringing kids to the world of GOT is dangerous, as this is a self insert story, and you chose to do that, i seriously am concerned about the choices you or your character will make in the story, i am also concerned about your characters interraction is it going to be made to be easily advantageous to your character like dumbing down intelligent characters or is there a plot armour for your mc, you know i just can't help myself to worry about how the story unfold sorry for ranting, i hope i provide constructive input to this

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In Westeros as Myself

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BattyGoody
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It's good to know, the main reason i'm making this really, is for the fun of it all, and to experiment with my character. Bringing the kids is was...kinda dumb to me too, but that's just how these bouts of inspiration work. Thanks for the criticism though.