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pacheriya_raoLv43yr
2022-04-02 23:29

It was fresh to read this ... you know something new . I enjoyed it very much but honestly I don't like the growing misunderstanding between author ( Davy ) and Jason . It would have been nice if Jason got to say that he is searching for his memories by coming to school when Davy asked him before getting transmigrated back to novel. You know Davy doesn't have alll the right to be angry with Jason as it is completely not his problem , Davy should also have tried to ask him the reason for his rejection in High school then he could have gotten gist of reality instead of hurting both of them. It was my personal opinion as I am not into too much misunderstandings but your novel was nice and specially characters for Davy and Jason ... I truly truly loved them , plot was also nice overall ( leaving misunderstanding part ..) Thank-you for writing novel ★★

QT: I Bent The Male Lead

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ClaisiceLouice
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First of all, this is a pretty interesting concept. Second, the work is both well-written and well-thought, I have not notice errors so far. It is already hooking and intriguing with only the first few chapters. I think, the MC is a really relatable character for readers, he's really cute. I love how his character was laid out. I just got caught off guard from the transition of point-of-views. Overall, this is a nice book with an amazing concept. I'd recommend this! ❤️

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Lillyfee
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The novel deserves a thumbs up. It is a nice read and funny too. Jason is quite an interesting character to read about. Wonderful job author.

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xiaohai_23
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Only two chapters are our, but the plot is already interesting. The MC is relatable, and his reactions are so natural and sometimes funny. The writing flaws from beginning to end, and you're left with the need to read more. Unfortunately, there aren't any many chapters yet. However, the updates seem stable.

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pan_pan_2279
pan_pan_2279Lv1

The writing is kind weird to read and i know its placed in the old times where sexism was the norm but that doesn’ t make it any less uncomfortable, pretty dumb mc that changes according to the plot?? And there are typos which i dont usually mind but all the other reviews keep saying its so good and well written?? Its pretty mid ig

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Akukit_Aakash_6511
Akukit_Aakash_6511Lv1

here's another idea people like mc harem not ml harem so why don't you make ml your mc. if you are going for that route I had rather let mc be with that girl atleast he will be happy. I just don't understand why there is ml superiority like every author tries to put mc down and torture him. And the end result will be that he get to share the person he loves with other person. add angst in your tag

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VoidUzumaki
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overall a good novel, the main problem i have with this novel is is how stupid the mc is because he is not only constanting creating problems for himself for no reason but when he tries to succeed in something he goes about it all the wrong way, if the most stupid mc that i have ever read(never thought that the title of that i would have to reassign it after the last mc i assigned it to) doesnt stop you then i can say that the novel is overall nice to read(probably better than that if your oppinion doesnt get worsened by the stupid mc).

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Asura_Sovereign21
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I really enjoyed this book. The way the characters of the story go together. It's a different way looking at the story. I was able to see a new perspective from how the Author would be apart of the story. It is very exciting to see how the Butterfly Effect takes place. Especially when it is the author changing the very nature of a story he himself wrote. I hope to be able to read and experience more from this series.

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Amstar_2403
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Tbh... Your writing kinda sucks... But you have a nice plot tho... There are lots of loopholes in your story... But u know how to keep a reader reading... Hope this review was helpful 😌

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