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2022-10-04 10:49

I can't lie after 337 chapter if you don't like this you have to be mentally insane, the story is really good, I can see if someone doesn't like the time skips, but it works perfectly with this story and I hope the author doesnt stop with the way he is progressing because its perfect😪🙌

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Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. If you are in between the fences, either to read or not, here is a few info about this novel.. [Spoiler Alert] First, this novel is not solo MC, who got strong alone.. Rather, you would barely see MC fight with other people.. Even his first time killing humans is around Ch.100.. Plus, even when there are wars that MC starts, he won't participate in the war personally.. so, what are MC roles in this novel? MC is creating many things.. for the first 10 chapters, you would see MC aged from 14 years old (Ch.1) until 150 years old.. Yes, the author loooooooves time skip.. 10 years later, 1 month later, 30 years later, 60 years later, 6 months later, and so on.. At least, every 5 chapters, you would see time skip.. Reason? Well, as I said before, Mc is creating many things.. So, I guess the author doesn't want to waste his time and others' time explaining MC every creation progress, details, and descriptions, so he skipped it.. Secondly, by doing time skip, the author also doesn't want to make MC too OP where he can "create" in a days or so.. So, every MC creating, it would take around 4 months per new creation.. What creation did MC make? MC is creating a new technique the law of element, introducing talisman for the 1st time the the world and it8 applications, new items/technology, creating new type of pills, new method and improved older one including weapon and armor.. So, this whole time, MC just sent someone to war/kill/beat/challenge his opponent or enemy instead of doing it himself.. MC only does "research" to make his adopted son/daughter, subordinate, and his allies stronger.. You won't see a strong solo MC, adventure, and fighting scene of MC.. Reincarnation?? Nope, MC is not a transmigrator or Reincarnator.. He is just a guy who doesn't want to follow the path that is created by others and wants to try his own idea and path.. System or AI? Nah.. Doesn't exist here.. Is MC genius? Genius in terms of creating and theoretical.. But not in fighting or strategy.. Is MC a strong cultivator?? If you compare MC with a kid, yes, he is OP.. But if you compare MC to the same age as him (150 years old), MC is weak as worm.. Why? MC studying the law and at the end of his life, he finally manage to glimpse a bit the law of truth making "the entity" helping MC by resetting his cultivation and his age into a kid.. So, he is 150 years old guys who have a face and body of 13 years old boy.. So, that why I said he is weak for someone at the age of 150 years old.. MC barely has any time for his own cultivation.. So, the adventures shown in this novel are not about MC but about his adopted son.. It is the same, the fight or the competition or the wars, all that will happen in this novel except, MC did not participate any of that, at all.. Kinda like One Punch Man where we barely see MC, Saitama storyline but see many side character storyline instead.. So, what up with this novel title, Lord of the Truth, how is it related? Well, all the MC creations have to do with it, or maybe it is easier to say MC compromises the Law of Truth.. From this Law of Truth, he can see through everything: Element, Laws, Souls, People, Fruit, Herb, Pill, Weapon, Armour, and so on.. He just makes all those things easily.. Note: I am giving a low rating due to my previous review being deleted.. I give mediocre rate (3 stars) because I don't think it is good, but also, don't think it that bad.. But after my review got deleted, I became more biased toward a bad boring novel..

MogeIman
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Before I get to reviewing this, let me preface this by saying that I still thoroughly enjoy reading this despite the brain-cells I lost. Now on to my review. TLDR very nice story, with subpar writing and characters but is excellent for passing time. 1: Writing Quality: Let us be honest, the writing is garbage. The author jumps between tenses constantly and uses the same phrases over and over again. This sort of writing makes the story bland and often messes with my immersion. I would suggest the author to go and get an editor to help him proofread the writing. I don't mean this as an insult to the author, I very much like the premise of the story and I would love to see it executed well, writing-wise. 2: Stability of Updates: Not much to be said here, as I am not fully caught up. 3: Story Development: I love the pacing of the story. It very much complements the "War & Military" aspect of the story. I love Kingdom Building stories and I like when they are executed well. Plot wise and Pace wise, the author is doing a great job. 4: Character Design: I had this at 3 stars before but now I made it 2 simply because there is no one character in this story that is unique. I know this what you typically expect of a cultivation novel, but that should never excuse the author of falling into the same troupes. All, and I mean literally every last one of them including the MC, is one dimensional. Side characters that have no brain of their own: check, FL that is cold and strong at first, but turns into an extension of the MC with absolutely nothing to add: check, an ambitious MC that... you get the idea. Character Interactions: This is a part of character design, however it is highly dependant on how well the author designs the characters personalities and such. So when you have all the same looking characters you get the same character interactions at every turn. MC meets someone new, said person disrespects him, mc says or does something, said person is amazed. and just repeat the process. 5:World Background: The world has a very nice premise. It has been perfectly illustrated thus far. The rules of the world have also been stated, which means the various power dynamics are clear and make sense. This sets the stage for a very nice kingdom building developments. Nicely done. To be honest I wouldn't have written this review if I didn't believe in the potential of this story. And to the author, if you are reading this I would like to say the following. This is your story and as the author/ creative mind behind it. You have every write to explore. Don't bind yourself to the troupes and limits that have been set. Explore with your writing, experiment with the characters. Make them awfully cruel, kind, brave and cowards. Or a mix of all of these, because one characteristic can never describe a human being otherwise they turn into caricatures. Try to make the world move even if the MC didn't exist, cus right now it doesn't feel like that. All I want to say is, experiment and go wild with it. All the best.

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