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I think the wish of letting his family live is stupid, why? It's cause, he might give it to people who would want to die in peace, the wish just makes people sad, Immortality or even a long life can make people suicidal. Dumb wish & how would the main character know whether the person (family member) is loyal to uzushiogakure or not? The person who gets the wolverine regeneration factor might as well be another Danzo. The wish should've been one that makes him be able to give the people he wants a long life, but what he got is messed up & stupid. And based on this idiocy, I don't think this story is worth it because the Author might as well keep doing dumb stuff and mess up this already unintelligent fanfic. [Not recommended for intelligent individuals]
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TacetIrae
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You're right. Just reading the first chapter makes you want to drop this story. The part where the MC asks for his 'wishes' is terrible, the MC basically asks for various skills and knowledge in one wish and the R.O.B is like: Done. For me the first chapter of a story says a lot about its future development, and I can say that this is totally disappointing. (Google translate)
heh make a story don't even want to accept criticism and don't even have an argument to straighten it out or a reason why mc is like that, and the criticism only answers if you don't like it don't read hey dude is aware you are making a story but don't have an argument when criticized better don't have to make a story hahaha
TacetIrae:Dont like it dont read it
was going to still give it a shot even after this comment but your attitude as an author is really disappointing honestly.
TacetIrae:Dont like it dont read it
kawaiiinow:was going to still give it a shot even after this comment but your attitude as an author is really disappointing honestly.
People who judge stories like this let me think about the question why are you even reading stories if all it takes to stop you from reading is a commentar from the author?
kawaiiinow:was going to still give it a shot even after this comment but your attitude as an author is really disappointing honestly.
might not mean much to you but for me and many others, the attitude of the person I'm receiving something from matters a lot. If a clerk is being rude and lazy, Im not going to purchase anything from them. I'd rather drop my things and go to another store. If my boss is racist, I'd hurriedly look for another job and bail immediately once I find a new one. Not sure why the attitude of an author doesn't affect you but I'm not gonna judge. (p.s I remember that the author also made comments like "you're one of those people that will still read my book even after saying this" and went on about how they were in the top rankings. Seems like they took the initiative to delete those comments) And also, I didn't judge the book. Never read it so I'm not in a position to give my opinion on it. All I said was that I don't like the authors attitude so I wouldn't be reading the book.
Foxschweif:People who judge stories like this let me think about the question why are you even reading stories if all it takes to stop you from reading is a commentar from the author?
