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Sebastym
SebastymLv113yr
2021-10-03 13:11

This fanfic is perfect, although a bit too much potential of the protagonist and a complaint about when the first ring turned black, I only remember that it was described as having some black in small parts...........

Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Heavenly Wolf

iLyannn
4.8
53 Chs

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NutAllinMyBut
NutAllinMyButLv13

Awesome start, definitely has the potential to become the best douluo dalu 2 fanfic. Very good grammar, hardly any mistakes. Character is likeable and interesting, looking forward to his development. Overall great start, I hope it gets seen by others so the author starts getting more support. Keep up the awesome work!

3yr

iLyannn
iLyannnAuthor

Me: As the author, I have the right to be shameless and give 5 stars to my fanfic! Someone: Author, you can't do this! Me: Shhh! Here are some chapters on brib-cough-appreciation for reading, then go play in the corner. Somebody: ... Errr... Please give my fanfic a chance so I can see how I'm doing on this journey. Thanks in advance!

3yr
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Review: Writing Quality has some grammar mistakes. Stability of Updates is pretty good. Story Development is forced to the point of me making sarcastic remarks such as: Of course it's weakened alone and you just so happen to kill it in one shot, or Obviously the spirit beast wouldn't attack you since you cleeeearly don't have anything it wants *cough Life Energy cough* and of course the panda would give you its ring and spirit bone because you helped it with something. Character Design, The Mc is bland and lacks a certain spark that comes with most reincarnated novels, I'm not bashing your ideas but, it just doesn't entertain or capture my attention. World Background, It would be rated lower but the world is douluo dalu so meh, back on track... we don't get any information other than what's going on right in the Mc's bubble, so we don't know the time and/or what part of the story it is, This isn't good for newer readers and makes it not feel like the douluo story. Summary: Writing Quality gets a 4 star, Stability of Updates gets a 5 star, Story Development gets a 3 star, Character Design gets a 2 star, and World Background gets a 4 star. tl:dr: minor grammar mistakes, good update stability, semi-forced plot, bland character, and very little beginning information on where the story starts. Overall: 3.6 stars

3yr
Rayashi
RayashiLv5

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Bella1000
Bella1000Lv4

Very Good!!! 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️

3yr
Dr_Absent_Minded
Dr_Absent_MindedLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
DarkSama
DarkSamaLv2

Pretty Good but I feel like mc is too OP and after a while the writer might stop updating cuz he made the mc a little too OP I like how things are going rn but welp I hope the writer doesn't stop updating

3yr
Yang_Guo
Yang_GuoLv15

Actually one of the best in this category that I have read. Good character development overall and enjoying the growth of the main character's ability.

3yr
LegendaryPrinny
LegendaryPrinnyLv4

Loving the story, just wish you update more. granted until a few days ago there were daily updates and i hope that comes back either way keep up the great work :)

3yr
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