Review Detail of sareshuma in Transcended as Lord Buggy

Item: Transcended as Lord Buggy
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

sareshumaLv42yrsareshuma

The grammar is absolutely horrible. It's broken english, and when I say broken, I mean utterly incomprehensible. They didn't even bother to capitalize a singular I. I'm giving the benefit of the doubt here since updates seem to be very consistent so far in hopes that this story drastically improves in the future. For the author, if you chance upon this, please either consider at least running your chapter/page through a grammar checker, or hire an editor. It will improve your quality of work significantly.

Transcended as Lord Buggy

Capt_mermain1

Liked by 76 people

Replies17

itrywritingLv1itrywriting

author dont feel bad, I can comprehend ever sentence. You can download grammarly on your laptop or phone and it will fix most mistakes. its free

2yr

Capt_mermain1AuthorCapt_mermain1

I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support

2yr

sareshumaLv4sareshuma

Thank you very much. I did not realize you were not a native speaker, and came off harsher than I should have. I apologize for that. I look forward to your improvements, since your story is right up my alley :)

2yr

FACE_IS_LAUGHINGLv2FACE_IS_LAUGHING

Before you read the novel read first the author's sypnopsis and you will understand. Some of them don't use third party app to correct their sentence, not fluent in composing english sentences or just mtl which is copy paste in other site. Just enjoy the fanfic of this guy.

2yr

Chris_MatteLv4Chris_Matte

is buggy going to see bellemere b4 goes grandline ????

2yr

RedzethLv13Redzeth

The best advice I can give you is to go to google, make an account and use their document app. It has grammer checks in place, when you are done writing you can copy paste it to webnovel.

2yr

sudiotakuLv12sudiotaku

2yr

LittleDemon47Lv4LittleDemon47

hey author, the story is not getting the attention it deserves due to grammar mistakes in the beginning, how about i proofread for you

2yr

Moon_WinchesterLv15Moon_Winchester

The broken english is like baby language so it's easy to understand.

1yr

ShirubafokkusuhimeLv14Shirubafokkusuhime

give me next chapter! I need my vitality boost!! give me my fluffies!!!!

1yr

ShirubafokkusuhimeLv14Shirubafokkusuhime

can you at least upgrade the chapters from four to five please? thank you... :3

1yr

ShirubafokkusuhimeLv14Shirubafokkusuhime

I need more than four chapters a week!

1yr

ShodaiKokyuLv11ShodaiKokyu

I've soon worse, and surprisingly like 15 people give it 5 star review. When i tried to read it, not only the grammar is horrible, the story is really reallyy average, like there's nothing special or unique about it.

1yr

Daoistrov1RLLv1Daoistrov1RL

Hi! Do you have discord or IG?

10mth

BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

Hey. I was wondering if you plan to start a new story now that your fairy tail fic is done.

9mth

BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

Any plans for a new story?

4mth

luckyrooLv3luckyroo

The fanfic has gotten lot better, so can you take your comment back? delete it

2mth