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Review Detail of Tsugihagu in What if Someone got lucky(Onhold)

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Tsugihagu
TsugihaguLv12yrTsugihagu

The writing is not so good and the protagonist is confused and generic. but I think the power to see the future interesting should have more fic with a protagonist with this power

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What if Someone got lucky(Onhold)

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ZeOwlAuthorZeOwl

I can agree with this, the whole thing is just essentially a powertrip, so the character will eventually lose his mind. that's really about it, for character development.

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ZeOwlAuthorZeOwl

More should use precognition, its a fun ability. Hard to write for depending but one could always write a story where the MC avoids all the main events but gets forced into them anyway since you can't change the future or something? *Ahem* if anyone does write that tell me the title.