The novels have become frivolous, boring, and perverted because of the author. He needs to read my comment just to benefit: the handsome hero with a friendly and kind family, a beautiful and warm mother, a beautiful or domineering sister, a likable and shy little brother, and a strong-hearted father, of course always the hero's family people They are good and enforce the law and love people of course they are angels, you will not find the hero's family of sadistic villains, thieves and murderers. And all the girls in the world of course only who have a dazzling beauty need his help, and those poor little girls feel the responsibility to help and save them, the hero whose biggest concern when he gets super power is to save humanity and the world. Something disgusting and vulgar all the novels have become a deviant character. The reader hates such novels because they have nothing to do with human truth, because they depict angels of peace and love. We wish the authors to change this trivial pattern and show us the true human instincts. Selfishness, anger, murder, theft, arrogance, pride, fraud, deception, impersonal, self-interested, does not care about anyone, does not interfere in the affairs of others, does not help people, this is how the novel will become interesting You will not be able to predict the actions of the characters The events will become unexpected And enthusiastic, and it will bring a new revolution in the field of novels because such a character does not exist. There is one novel that I know is Revenend insanity. I guarantee you the success of your novel even if you are a beginner. Don't make the hero crazy, don't make him stupid, make him only care about his interests

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I liked a lot of story and plot, the story is very good, I liked it a lot, I laughed a lot until I couldn't take it anymore, very interesting and amazing protagonist, I highly recommend

There's nothing for me to say except that this novel is a great masterpiece. This story updates at a good pace. The story is developing/has developed very well.

You had my curiosity, now you have my attention. Chapter 1 is very hooking. It will let you read more. The sacrifice... is nice. I mean, That's the sacrifice I've been wanting too. Good luck to the author in the spirity award!

great story, excellent character development and rather satisfying world-building. personally I love how most of the common trops are either not present of have been employed in new and innovative ways.

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I am really interested in reading more of this story, to have an established protaganist is a change from the recent sign up system stories that are currently in vogue right now.

Writing quality is 5/5. Update stability is 5/5 Story development is 5/5 Character design is 5/5 World background is 5/5