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NagaKarat
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2021-09-24 17:35

This story even with 20 chapters has promises to engage mY attention. I would like to know more about the protagonist but twenty chapters are not enough.

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GuzaSan
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The prompt is MC is living in a "digitized world" as said in the synopsis where a portion of the people get a mark on their hand after graduation I guess that allows them to access the system which shows their stats and allows them to cultivate, enter secret realms and pretty much do everything related to cultivation. There is the mortal world where everyone can enter, and when people with the mark die they get 1 more chance to live a mortal life there. In addition to that, there are secret realms from which people get resources from that can only be accessed by people in a certain cultivation realm. MC basically gets a bunch of OP stuff once he breaks through, daily, weekly, monthly, and pretty much like a Gacha game, I guess. On to the actual review. The only somewhat interesting thing here is the setting with the whole digitized thing. Story development is awful IMO mainly because MC doesn't actually have any goal or anything, he just roams around and he claims he wants to max out every realm but he doesn't really do that or again, puts any effort into anything at all. So MC goes with the flow, Character design is pretty garbage but I can't say I expect anything in this category these days. Shouting skill names before using them is cringe, a lot of inconsistencies with the values. What's the point of having accurate attributes like 5000 strength and the likes when even if MC has strength at the peak of a realm he apparently still has to waste time on someone that's just about the breakthrough the early stage? The answer is there is no point and it's just stalling on minor enemies. There are just so many inconsistencies, in general, it really seems like a sketch. Like that time he said it's extremely rare or close to impossible for someone to break through to the 3rd realm in 100 days but this random girl/ MC's previous best friend (🙄) has this crazy talent and did it in less than a month. I really see no future for this - It doesn't matter how many treasures you throw at this MC but he can't do anything without the right goal or motivation. TL: DR - MC has no goal, tons of inconsistencies, and all in all everything just feels super scuffed. Wouldn't recommend it.

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