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GuzaSanLv33yr
2021-10-01 15:51

The prompt is MC is living in a "digitized world" as said in the synopsis where a portion of the people get a mark on their hand after graduation I guess that allows them to access the system which shows their stats and allows them to cultivate, enter secret realms and pretty much do everything related to cultivation. There is the mortal world where everyone can enter, and when people with the mark die they get 1 more chance to live a mortal life there. In addition to that, there are secret realms from which people get resources from that can only be accessed by people in a certain cultivation realm. MC basically gets a bunch of OP stuff once he breaks through, daily, weekly, monthly, and pretty much like a Gacha game, I guess. On to the actual review. The only somewhat interesting thing here is the setting with the whole digitized thing. Story development is awful IMO mainly because MC doesn't actually have any goal or anything, he just roams around and he claims he wants to max out every realm but he doesn't really do that or again, puts any effort into anything at all. So MC goes with the flow, Character design is pretty garbage but I can't say I expect anything in this category these days. Shouting skill names before using them is cringe, a lot of inconsistencies with the values. What's the point of having accurate attributes like 5000 strength and the likes when even if MC has strength at the peak of a realm he apparently still has to waste time on someone that's just about the breakthrough the early stage? The answer is there is no point and it's just stalling on minor enemies. There are just so many inconsistencies, in general, it really seems like a sketch. Like that time he said it's extremely rare or close to impossible for someone to break through to the 3rd realm in 100 days but this random girl/ MC's previous best friend (🙄) has this crazy talent and did it in less than a month. I really see no future for this - It doesn't matter how many treasures you throw at this MC but he can't do anything without the right goal or motivation. TL: DR - MC has no goal, tons of inconsistencies, and all in all everything just feels super scuffed. Wouldn't recommend it.

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someone_crazy
someone_crazyLv3

all I can say is That throwing a lot of good stuff to the MC won't make him better

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

so a boring nerfed op mc. Good to know, I'm avoiding

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

might try it since I'm bored though and if its really as bad as you say well that sucks

DeathLingers:so a boring nerfed op mc. Good to know, I'm avoiding
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

took 25ch for him to be a beta simp and let some thot follow him. I hope his childhood friend who definitely likes him. kills him when he finds him being surrounded by girls

DeathLingers:might try it since I'm bored though and if its really as bad as you say well that sucks
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

have to say I did waste my time it seems. nerfed op mc and possible harem trash. Read to 40 and thats enough for me

DeathLingers:took 25ch for him to be a beta simp and let some thot follow him. I hope his childhood friend who definitely likes him. kills him when he finds him being surrounded by girls
GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14

thank you for your sacrifice

DeathLingers:have to say I did waste my time it seems. nerfed op mc and possible harem trash. Read to 40 and thats enough for me
klle
klleLv1

this is worst than faloo novels

EvilDoraemon
EvilDoraemonLv3

i hate this mc hes to kind for me

Matthew_Gooche
Matthew_GoocheLv12

Well that's enough to stop me from reading this. Thank you.

OtakuSumit
OtakuSumitLv4

good for me i am not gonna read it after reading everyone's experience .

Hirayagi_Seichi
Hirayagi_SeichiLv1

thanks for sacrifice

IFuckedJadeBeauty
IFuckedJadeBeautyLv13

Thanks bro for telling us i really hate nerf mc

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