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One would expect a little different story considering the synopsis. MC should be more powerful. Now, the MC is more like the student who gained some knowledge from a Jedi Master but his character remained young an inexperienced.
hidden in the force
Moon579
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The mc suffers from a disorder of emotions which is due to his regression and his inexperience is more because his body is still developing and he is not used to it. Not to mention that he has never felt a wide range of emotions. Still thank you very much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.
Body still developing shouldnt matter much for a jedi and with the synopsis he should have a lot of experience so he shouod be fine and if he actually has a disorder put that in the synopsis.... and he should be able to control his emotions better if he had dooku as a former master. Good luck wih the rest of youre story!
Moon579:The mc suffers from a disorder of emotions which is due to his regression and his inexperience is more because his body is still developing and he is not used to it. Not to mention that he has never felt a wide range of emotions. Still thank you very much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.