Review Detail of MARSH5MALLOW in ROSE

The first chap got me hooked and I couldn't stop reading. It's really a nice book here. But it would be nice if written to the third person and not first person. Written like this, you can only talk about scenes where the MC was at and not other places. I recommend to change or it would be complicated in the future. The grammar and vocabulary is fluent and the characters developments are so nice. Continue with the work and you shall be rewarded