Review Detail of TheLionfish in Aether Beasts

Meh, it's alright. I only have a few problems with the story. Though these problems make me hesitant to unlock new chapters. One the chapters are super short. Pair that with some conversation fluff that the author could leave out, then you have entire chapters where nothing happens. I'd be pretty upset if I unlocked a chapter where there is 80% fluff. Next, the characters are fine. But the romance moved so fast that it was a bit comical. It was soooo forced and unnatural. This could have been fixed by extending the time they spent together. The story itself is fine. Though it goes from zero to 100 then back to zero again pretty often. I'm not talking about impromptu action scenes but what's at stake during those fights. The pacing is like a Rollercoaster with more lulls than peeks and I found myself becoming frustrated while reading. It's like edging. All in all, I won't continue the book. It was better than most of the trial reads though. So there's that.