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Fito
FitoLv52yr
2022-08-31 01:04

the story has a good point of origin, the mc used the knowledge he had to be stronger, using technology seemed very interesting, but then comes all that philosophical journey of what is real and not, and then the mc becomes a comic book villain who thinks he's saving the universe while killing some innocents along the way, the mc doesn't seem totally bad, but i wouldn't say he's a good person either.

Dragon ball: Tuffle reborn

ZeOwl
4.1
104 Chs

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ZeOwl
ZeOwlAuthor

Author review, its amazing, and ill fix anything unclear in the story just try to tell me, Many have mentioned timeline of the story... DONT WORRY ABOUT THE TIMELINE IT HAS A SOLUTION AND HAS BEEN SET UP. If you want a hint watch DBS.

3yr

Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv14

I'll probably wait till 50 or so chapters till I re-review this, but so far the story is all over the place. The MC has a strange background, lost his emotions or something? Random flashbacks giving irrelevant information when there has been no description so far. Does he have new parents? Was he kicked out from the family? Where is he in the timeline? Etc, etc. So far many questions with no answers, and speaking about a past that has no relevance whatsoever to the story if he no longer has his adult emotions (Unless I'm missing something?)

3yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Another cringe "God gives me wishes" story. ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........

3yr
Lustlara_52
Lustlara_52Lv3

There are so many problems with this story. The biggest problem is the long paragraphs and second biggest problem is the MC being literally the stupidest person ever. I've never hated a MC of a fanfic as much as I hate this one.

2yr
A9B
A9BLv4

as usual all your stories are fun to read and different, a good kind of different, keep up the good job. always a pleasure to read your books<3

2yr
Valfren
ValfrenLv4

good,fun,different. even if its a little slow. always with interesting and unique ideas auther-san? love u and your beautiful mind.

2yr
AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

Not a reader, but this novel keeps popping up and I keep reading it as 'truffle' instead of tuffle. Don't mind the rating, it's just cause I don't like harems.

2yr
TruckDSan
TruckDSanLv11

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i see

2yr
NPSC2377
NPSC2377Lv1

The novel is considered well written, but I also want to know if the main character will be able to go about the main story of the story. How can Dragon Ball be and the girls who will become the hero's harem, who would like to know too, so let's wait and read. I hope to read the next chapter soon.

3yr
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