Review Detail of NSTK in My Iron Battle Suit [MIBS]
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I am giving this story 3 for effort, but wow was this difficult to read as it is VERY Chinese and writing in the style of "Shen did this then he did this then Shen did that and Shen saw this and thought that" it was a very exhausting read and i found myself drawing a deep breath an exhaling out of frustration. It also felt like the MC was pulling out abilities from nowhere.
My Iron Battle Suit [MIBS]
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“Harry got a letter saying he was accepted into Hogwarts. The next day, Harry found himself on Platform 9 1/2” Oh wait, Harry Po.tter is Chinese! “John snow found a beautiful snow-white Direwolf. Joffrey ate a pigeon pie while thinking about his dwarf uncle” Oh Game of Thrones is Chinese too! Lol You must be used to reading a lot of first-person SI wish-fulfillment fanfics huh? A third-person perspective doesn’t necessarily mean it's a Chinese novel. Anyway, it's understandable to have a Chinese feel to it since this WAS originally, a Chinese fanfic and I only started this off as a translation. If you can do a better job or can find another novel that's done a better job of it, then please go ahead and show me. I’ve literally put in all of my efforts into it, doing research and pulling all-nighters.
I honestly find it funny how it wasn't the original language of the fic (synopsis), the nationality of the MC (synopsis) nor the country where the first few chapters is located that made him feel that way. No, it was the third person perspective that did it for him, "VERY Chinese" hahaha
Daoist_XXL: Idk what this guy is on about but I loved this fic. Sure, its not a first person SI, but it was still very enjoyable. Not to mention, what does "VERY Chinese" even mean??
🔥🔥🔥 lol. You do you author-san. From the chapter titles, the author notes, to the minute details in each and every chapter, your efforts can clearly be see. You could've just translated the original Chinese story like everyone else but you've always gone above and beyond. I'm sure the readers appreciate that, as I surely do. So, don't listen to them nay sayers and you do you, FIGHTING!!
SKCSKC:“Harry got a letter saying he was accepted into Hogwarts. The next day, Harry found himself on Platform 9 1/2” Oh wait, Harry Po.tter is Chinese! “John snow found a beautiful snow-white Direwolf. Joffrey ate a pigeon pie while thinking about his dwarf uncle” Oh Game of Thrones is Chinese too! Lol You must be used to reading a lot of first-person SI wish-fulfillment fanfics huh? A third-person perspective doesn’t necessarily mean it's a Chinese novel. Anyway, it's understandable to have a Chinese feel to it since this WAS originally, a Chinese fanfic and I only started this off as a translation. If you can do a better job or can find another novel that's done a better job of it, then please go ahead and show me. I’ve literally put in all of my efforts into it, doing research and pulling all-nighters.
Totally agree, The effort put by the author can be seen clearly, if you have read the chapters till now.
ImStella:🔥🔥🔥 lol. You do you author-san. From the chapter titles, the author notes, to the minute details in each and every chapter, your efforts can clearly be see. You could've just translated the original Chinese story like everyone else but you've always gone above and beyond. I'm sure the readers appreciate that, as I surely do. So, don't listen to them nay sayers and you do you, FIGHTING!!