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This novel has a very unique plot, I was immediately pulled in by the storyline. The novel has enough intrigue to truly keep you reading about this old lady lol. However, the novel is written in the present tense which makes it a bit confusing since by right, novels and stories overall are to be written in the past tense. The novel started nice and clean with little to no grammatical and spelling errors but as I read on they became a bit more prominent giving the impression that the author started to rush while writing. Overall, this novel is beaming with potential and I enjoyed the few chapters I've read so far. [img=recommend]

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An Undying Love Story

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thank you! it’s in a diary format hence the present tense. the typos are kind of embarrassing I promise I’ll proofread it soon!!