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L_Dome1
L_Dome1Lv41yrL_Dome1

Well not a bad introduction i like the start and the fact that the story start way before canon. There is only a thing that i don't undarstand why not making the mc 17 years old , 27 y. old seem fine but strange... . Anyway it is too early to judge but still i liked the idea so i wanted to write a review , just a suggestion make the story realistic like skills, magic, basic stats , don't make him have sss 1300 after 2 month... . Good luck in any case.

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Danmachi: Outsider's journey

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futur_hop
futur_hopAuthorfutur_hop

Hi there! Thank you for writing the very first review, I really appreciate it! Regarding the MC, he wasn't actually introduced yet. So, please, wait a little bit :) Speaking of realism, you're right. It won't be a story about an adventurer with a cheat skill that makes him level up every couple of months. Thus, don't worry about that as well :) I hope you will enjoy reading the new chapters to come!

ThreshGasm
ThreshGasmLv4ThreshGasm

do you mean that this is fanfic is not harem ?

futur_hop:Hi there! Thank you for writing the very first review, I really appreciate it! Regarding the MC, he wasn't actually introduced yet. So, please, wait a little bit :) Speaking of realism, you're right. It won't be a story about an adventurer with a cheat skill that makes him level up every couple of months. Thus, don't worry about that as well :) I hope you will enjoy reading the new chapters to come!
futur_hop
futur_hopAuthorfutur_hop

You are right. I have no plans to make it harem. Cuz MC is only 8 years old :)

ThreshGasm:do you mean that this is fanfic is not harem ?
hammer_dog
hammer_dogLv4hammer_dog

does it have romance ? if it is who is the love interest ?

futur_hop
futur_hopAuthorfutur_hop

It surely will have a romance line, however, I can't anything for sure since the work is at its early stage. Please, continue reading it further and I promise you that you'll see it :)

hammer_dog:does it have romance ? if it is who is the love interest ?
hammer_dog
hammer_dogLv4hammer_dog

oh okay I can't wait who is the love interest I will keep reading then I hope you don't drop this book I hope you have a good day 😁

futur_hop:It surely will have a romance line, however, I can't anything for sure since the work is at its early stage. Please, continue reading it further and I promise you that you'll see it :)
Vastoking
VastokingLv5Vastoking

is the mc reincanated, or is he originally from there

futur_hop:You are right. I have no plans to make it harem. Cuz MC is only 8 years old :)
futur_hop
futur_hopAuthorfutur_hop

He is originally from there, no reincarnations :)

Vastoking:is the mc reincanated, or is he originally from there