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L_Dome14mthCommentedThanks for the chapter i really like the world building i also read some pokemon fanfictions like rise of dark pokemon or the bounty hunter one. This novel at the start feels similar to those well apart from the fact that there is no goldfinger. The only thing i want to suggest is that is better to keep the number of pokemon trained very low like 1 or 2 at the beginning and 6 later in the story. That is the reason why i never finished a pokemon fanfiction because at the end i fells like collecting pokemons with no real reason or purpose. Anyway good luck for the novel my powerstones of the day are yours when i received them that is.
Ch 3 Chapter 3 : The World of Pokemon- L_Dome15mthReplied to tedmosby2016
if he had an impact in the story he would most likely be dead by now seeing the normal shinobi life expectancy expecially of young geniuses in konoha.But again if you think he would manage to survive against all odds that's called plot armor my friend.ps i don't like plot armor...
So Fujin was in a weird spot. At the present time, due to his young age, he had no way of becoming the Hokage. If anything were to happen to Hiruzen, both the Sannins and Kakashi had a much higher chance of becoming Hokage than him. His name might not even be brought up by the council and even Shikaku would be preferred over him despite being weaker than him. Even if he kept becoming stronger and gained a lot of achievements, six years later, Naruto's reputation would reach a level far beyond any other ninja in history. - L_Dome15mthCommented
i have an idea creating a moving bubble without chakra infused wind inside the domain so that noone can absorbe the chakra but fujin can still use it for ninjutsu.
Granted that there aren't many ninjas with this ability, but the ones who do are absolutely broken. Pain, Madara and later Obito and Sasuke would all be able to directly absorb the chakra I emit. If I can't use my main fighting style against them, then my chances of victory would drop hard. How do I counter that? - L_Dome16mthReplied to chandanchd7
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Apart from this, there is the idea I had with the rank E and D jutsus before I decided to drop them. That idea might be the key to implementing the idea I had when I was learning Susumu's Wind Style Genjutsu. If I can master this and reach the level I am imagining, then I'm certain that I will be able to go against any rank S ninja. - L_Dome18mthReplied to ZorpaarCh 292 Chapter 289 : The Unluckiest Squad!
- L_Dome19mthReplied to Tanath
For now no but i think it was more or less implied that he will get the swift release. But i could be wrong...
Chapter 272 : Unleashing the Monster! - L_Dome110mthCommented
Well teach him how to do wind vacuum jutsus.
[A/N: Feel free to comment on what other skills you would like to see Winged Sabertooths use. Would love to hear your ideas as usual :-)] - L_Dome110mthCommented
It is not really on theme with the question but i was thinking why not use the seal of Tsunade not only for normal chakra but also for natural chakra and not only one so that he could have some kinda batteries of chakra . Ps the Strength of a Hundred Seal of tsunade is not her healing jutsu so he should be able to find it in section A of the library , the only problem would be his chakra control.
[A/N: Would love to hear your thoughts and ideas on a power beyond Senjutsu. But don't involve anything related to Tailed Beasts or Otsutsuki.] - L_Dome110mthCommented
Why did it sound like summoning to me and most importantly why i remember the seals of summoning?????
Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram - L_Dome110mthCommented
GENIUS LOGIC
Fujin looked into his eyes and said in an innocent tone, "Grandpa, if the things written here are true, then you need to promote me to Elite Jounin rank immediately and pay me the rewards for a few rank S missions." - L_Dome110mthCommented
You know Fujin in Akatsuki robes would not be a bad outcome at least it would be very innovative story wise.
Not to mention, I might be hunted by both Konoha and Kumo. And if by chance I survive and get stronger, Akatsuki might show up asking me to join them. Sigh, what a mess.' - L_Dome111mthCommented
You will understand who is that sealmaster soon enough Hiruzen and when you do ,it will be too late for you i'm afraid....
Only a few with authority like the clan leaders or strong ninjas can go around it and get those seals on their houses. So how did Fujin manage to convince a SealMaster to inscribe such this seal on his house?' - L_Dome111mthCommented
Just a suggestion ,at least in my opinion, avoid too much dreams realm and heroic stuff without action. Otherwise at the end of the chapter it feels like nothing happened and the story does not progress. At least for me the cool things about danmachi are the "status page" and the "dungeon /adventure " the rest are an extra . If the story focus too much on the extra stuff becomes a bit boring at least for me. Anyway mine is only a suggestion you can write what you like more ,after all the novel is yours.... Good luck in any case as usual
Ch 16 The man in the black - L_Dome111mthPosted
Well not a bad introduction i like the start and the fact that the story start way before canon. There is only a thing that i don't undarstand why not making the mc 17 years old , 27 y. old seem fine but strange... . Anyway it is too early to judge but still i liked the idea so i wanted to write a review , just a suggestion make the story realistic like skills, magic, basic stats , don't make him have sss 1300 after 2 month... . Good luck in any case.
- L_Dome11yrPosted
I believe this novel is the best ff about the naruto world in webnovel . Slow start real "weak to strong " . The mc is a coward and that in my opinion is a damn good thing there are too many story out there where the mc is a hero of sort and should have died 1000 times. Anothere thing i like is that his training is fast in comparison to others but not too much faster, so don't expect him to become a jonin after 2 years or something like that. All in all good luck author ;)
- L_Dome11yrCommented
A wind chamber where he can learn to fly using the wind
[A/N : Ideas for the remaining 5 rooms are welcome.] - L_Dome11yrPosted
Good novel but i like the genre so i don't count for an honest review the only problem that i have is about the talent why mc always have weak talents. Weak talent means two alternatives first case the mc has a system in my opinion ruin the story or second alternative mc manage to succed eating a lot of resouces so plotarmor or if there is no plot armor the rest of the world seemed composed of idiots while the mc is the only clever one. In any case the result is a worse novel at least for me anyway i finished my rant good luck to the author i enjoy these novels in any case weak talent or not...
- L_Dome11yrCommented
well it was a fun match no doubt about it
A/N: Shittt I forgot to update... to busy watching the world cup ffs... sorry, anyways, enjoy the chap. - L_Dome11yrCommented
The third magic will be Arcanum , or something that can get him home "i hope the first one".
Well, ever since chapter 5 people have been making theories about his 3rd magic, what did you think it was going to be? - L_Dome11yrCommented
doesn't he have the 30% bonus on ice spell. It doesn't apply here ?
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