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NSTKLv102yr
2022-01-22 15:05

The author doesn't seem to know what present or past tense is he uses knew when it should be know or told instead of tell that's just the tip of the problems he has with tense's. Sentence structure is good in some places but horrible in other's there's no consistency in the quality of writing. He uses a lot of wrong words that are somewhat related to the word he should be using, I'm guessing google translate here. As for the story.... Things just seem to happen people we haven't seen before are introduced as someone the MC has met before and know. The MC's parents are background characters and are mentioned maybe 3 times in the first 10 chapters, he may as well been an orphan. Finally when i stopped reading i could already tell that this was going the be one of those stories where the MC just pulls skill's out of thin air when he needs them and you'll probably never hear of those skills again.

Wandering in Omniverse

Myth_Valley
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291 Chs

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Ototsu_Yume
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^I completely agree, also on the note of grammar, he also has a habit of mixing up names, like he will have mc talking to a characters mother for a while and after half a chapter or so waifu's mother will start thinking of her mother telling her about something meaning that it was actually the waifu the whole time but with the wrong name, this happens a lot where names are just mixed up which changes the whole meaning of some chapters content.

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So let me ask you a question first. What whould happen if you take absolutely op guy that have no character whatsoever and bring him in the world that have not much content on it's own? A horrendously boring story. I was afraid that with cultivation story whould become quite lackluster and repeative. Plus all those dumb clichés. But I was wrong, I shouldn't be afraid of them. Even though those things happened at least it was something. Because in a story itself nothing happened. Main character is overpowered beyond limits so all training scene skipped. He have no characters those we got yes-man that only doing what he was asked without any desires and goals. So what do you think, how whould author solve this mess? What is he's to write about? About how op mc train some useless kids and giving away powers like candies. Solving problems of people in between. - I am not joking that's exactly what happened in 20 chapters that I read. Conclusion : boring piece of *cough cough *.Better to look how plants will grow then reading this useless piece of text.

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I like it so far. If you like fanfics you will like this. First world is TDG. He gets put into Nei Li’s body. also he is very Op. Like strongest in his city op already. I dont wanna spoil Too much but I recommend You read. Keep it up author

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I like the rewritten more. Thank you for that.

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Muy bueno, me interesa bastante el resto del desarrollo de la historia pero hasta ahora esta bastante bien

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My suggestion is that the scale of power used is too much in this novel. As a comparison, the strongest person in Tdg Aja Tier 4A and Sage Emperor 4 C. And that alone is equivalent to the supreme emperor in your novel 🤣. When compassed in cultivation, the saint rank- Sage is Tier 3C-3A. And Sage Rank- Demi god will be Multiverse rank Tier 2C-2A, And True God Tier Is 1C Dimensional. The strongest is Eternal God Tier 1B-1A. This is the best scale that I can conclude from the many ridiculous realms you have written. I summarize and explain 🥳🤣

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