The author doesn't seem to know what present or past tense is he uses knew when it should be know or told instead of tell that's just the tip of the problems he has with tense's. Sentence structure is good in some places but horrible in other's there's no consistency in the quality of writing. He uses a lot of wrong words that are somewhat related to the word he should be using, I'm guessing google translate here. As for the story.... Things just seem to happen people we haven't seen before are introduced as someone the MC has met before and know. The MC's parents are background characters and are mentioned maybe 3 times in the first 10 chapters, he may as well been an orphan. Finally when i stopped reading i could already tell that this was going the be one of those stories where the MC just pulls skill's out of thin air when he needs them and you'll probably never hear of those skills again.
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^I completely agree, also on the note of grammar, he also has a habit of mixing up names, like he will have mc talking to a characters mother for a while and after half a chapter or so waifu's mother will start thinking of her mother telling her about something meaning that it was actually the waifu the whole time but with the wrong name, this happens a lot where names are just mixed up which changes the whole meaning of some chapters content.
