this is probably the most boring naruto fanfic I have ever read ok it started already but after that it went down hill he befriends naruto which I dont like as befriending naruto beings more cons than pros but the author clearly doesn't know the cons example why isn't the third Hokage suspicious that naruto the person everyone in the village hates suddenly has a friend huh huge plot hole and when naruto starts crying because he gets a friend he starts crying as well and has to hold it back my guy your a grown as man why you crying and you'll say oh hes a child hes psychologically a grown man so dumb then he trains but hide his strength like W.Ť.F no likes a mc that hides his strength then when he is asked whats his dream he says to find a woman and settle down and that was when I drop did he forget about the akatsuki and pain and you live in the shinobi world a world where kids are sent to war a world where beasts that can destroy a village roam the land and place where I guy that was supposed to be dead fights 80% of the shinobi alliance pull out a meteor from nowhere fight all the kages konoha previous kages the tailed beasts and the protagonist and only got killed because of plot armour and you want to settle down and relax drop grammar isn't bad but the idea and plot is trash read some naruto fanfictions and come back because this is not it well creation is hard I wish you the best but 2 stars for me
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Actually if you read past that he becomes strong enough and still gets his dream and the reason for it is shown near the end. I actually like but you don't have to go back and read it
